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| speadee 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI agree that people wouldn't be going to the beach in the winter. However, where I live, winters aren't too cold, so there are also people at the beach in winter. I like the wish in a bottle idea. You also kept those on the phone in charater. |
| AnGeLoFsAdNeSs027 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseyour fic is so cute ^^ i mean it and fuji and tezuka is so sweet ^^ it's a really nice story and keep it up ^^ the last part was funny though hehe |
| silverskye_angel 2005-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abusehey! love ur fic,its so sweet and romantic that i think i had a toothache when i read it. i read it ages ago but only had the time 2 review now...well better late then never right. hope u'll continue writng new fics and post them soon.lol. |
| black_ang3l 2005-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehoi hoi.. comment as promise!! heheheeh i think the idea is good, but the ooc is kinda disturb me a bit. It's romantic nonetheless and me like romanticness hheeheh |
| whity 2005-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse-too lazy to sign in- hiya~~! sorry for the late review, rav-chan~! (i'm using my computer to search for an article for my biology project now >. |
| pratz 2005-02-23 ch 1, | abusehohoho... rav, you'd done it nice! -pratz |
| aquatix 2005-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseQT (read: cutie!) XDXD skipping skul? maa... they're smart anyways, not like me. ^o^ anyway, keep writing, juz like i told whity-chan, i'll beta read ur ficcies ^^ |
| yoshikochan 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseSo cute!! Sweet ^__^ I love their messages. I love TezuFu! |
| DnKS-giRLs 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseYay! It's sweet! We too hope can have them for our valentine present, but life is so cruel, ne... |
| dogsruleW 2005-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo cute ^.^ Good job, write more! |
| KagomeGirl021 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abusekawaii! so romantic!! |
| Rei 2005-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh, creative idea, I must say, but the title is a bit mismatched. Other than that, it's perfectly fine. (except for some typos and grammar errors) |