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Reviews For: A Smile for V

speadee
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseI agree that people wouldn't be going to the beach in the winter. However, where I live, winters aren't too cold, so there are also people at the beach in winter.

I like the wish in a bottle idea. You also kept those on the phone in charater.
AnGeLoFsAdNeSs027
2006-03-23
ch 1,
abuseyour fic is so cute ^^ i mean it and fuji and tezuka is so sweet ^^ it's a really nice story and keep it up ^^ the last part was funny though hehe
silverskye_angel
2005-07-22
ch 1, anon.
abusehey! love ur fic,its so sweet and romantic that i think i had a toothache when i read it. i read it ages ago but only had the time 2 review now...well better late then never right. hope u'll continue writng new fics and post them soon.lol.
black_ang3l
2005-04-12
ch 1, anon.
abusehoi hoi.. comment as promise!! heheheeh i think the idea is good, but the ooc is kinda disturb me a bit. It's romantic nonetheless and me like romanticness hheeheh
whity
2005-03-01
ch 1, anon.
abuse-too lazy to sign in-
hiya~~! sorry for the late review, rav-chan~! (i'm using my computer to search for an article for my biology project now >.
pratz
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abusehohoho... rav, you'd done it nice!

-pratz
aquatix
2005-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseQT (read: cutie!) XDXD skipping skul? maa... they're smart anyways, not like me. ^o^ anyway, keep writing, juz like i told whity-chan, i'll beta read ur ficcies ^^
yoshikochan
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseSo cute!! Sweet ^__^ I love their messages. I love TezuFu!
DnKS-giRLs
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseYay! It's sweet! We too hope can have them for our valentine present, but life is so cruel, ne...
dogsruleW
2005-02-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo cute ^.^ Good job, write more!
KagomeGirl021
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abusekawaii! so romantic!!
Rei
2005-02-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh, creative idea, I must say, but the title is a bit mismatched. Other than that, it's perfectly fine. (except for some typos and grammar errors)
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