...wow. How to Look After Your Dyed Hair.

Just...wow. Great touch.

I like Freya and Amarant V day fan fics. Fratley was a real jerk and Freya really deserves Amarant. I'm glad you thought of that. Sorry it took me a long time to read it. February is a busy school month.(So is april actually.) Anyway,good job.

It's funny how whenever I see an Amarant and Freya romance story, there is always someone out of character.
The major case in this is Fratley. I know he's lost his memory but he would not make an assumption like that, nor would he be insensitive enough to buy a book like that. I also found it hard to picture him cursing so loudly. Also, if he forgot it was Valentine's Day just what party did he think he was going to?
Amarant was also a minor case, I'd never see him comfort someone, let alone Freya. I also think he'd have a more stonger reaction to Fratley's act than he did, and I also think Freya would have punched Fratley at that point.
Next time, stick to Freya and Fratley as a romance. It was the way it was meant to be.
I look forward to seeing more work from you though.