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| GRISSOM LOVER 07 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusegreat story |
| Manateia 2007-12-29 ch 100, | abuseI just discover your story and read it in 3 weeks. And now it's the end I just want to tell you WOW. This is amazing, I really like your story and I'd like (if you're agree) to translate it in french that more people can read it. Once again thanks for your story and keep writing yo are really good. |
| NickyStokes 2007-11-11 ch 19, | abuseJust found your fanfic 'Finding Me' it's awesome, the writing is great although, I am reading faster to get to the part (I hope) where Grissom overcomes his shyness. I love your writing and don't worry about grammer, people will read right through it... |
| jenstog 2007-10-31 ch 100, | abuseJust stumbled apon this I think yesterday- and have forgone all housework to read it all. It is a most amazing story and I'm sad that it's over! Yes- people are still reading it over two years later! I typically frown upon stories that don't stick to character and even though you had a few of those moments- it still felt real and I could see all of this storyline potentially happening for the characters! Bravo on a well-thought out and laborous story! |
| jenstog 2007-10-30 ch 4, | abuseso good! |
| chriscarter661 2007-08-10 ch 100, anon. | abuseSeriously it's my favorite story.. I really like it. It's the second time i read it, and like the first time, I love it ! Thank you very much for all the time you had to pass on this story.. Great one. Sorry for my english (french grl with not a really good english...) Thanks a lot Chriscarter661 |
| csi020gsr 2006-12-25 ch 100, | abuseI realise this was started in Feb. of '05 and it is Dec. 25th. right now. I just finished this monster and I have to put voice to my log! First of all, this is meant to be concrit. Next, it is too long. You had said at the beginning it was several stories pieced together. It is much better as several stories. The angst was so overwhelming, they never seemed to get past it until the very end. (Counseling and AA). They always seemed to be fighting, the only difference was a different room or car. They said the same things every time. And I was confused by Sara not wanting to talk about her problem's, but she would still make them so obvious. I don't even remember reading the first 70 or 80 chapters. You did get a phenominal number of reviews, however hardly any of them are familliar in '06. It's still concrit. How do you get to Carnigie Hall? Practice, practice, practice. |
| csi020gsr 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI know this 2 yrs old. But 1st ch. was good. Although I was confused by him following Sara in his car to pick her up. If they were both going the same direction on the right side of the street, she shouldn't have had to go around the car to get to the passenger seat. Unless they are in Europe! This one will keep me busy for weeks. I wont review every ch. though. On to ch. 2. |
| XXKS81XX 2006-09-13 ch 100, anon. | abusewow! one of the best stories i`ve ever read. thank you! |
| cabooklover21 2006-09-11 ch 100, | abuseGreat story, so glad to have stumbled upon it! |
| ligaras 2006-07-09 ch 17, anon. | abuseElvis, Elvis, Elvis! Hee, he was all I could picture throughout this whole hair dye fiasco, LOL;) Enjoying your story so far, thanks. -L. |
| somedayGSR 2006-05-26 ch 100, | abusewow. just wow. your story is so addicting. the last three days of my life have really been trying to balance reading this and well, everything else...and this usually won. anyways, i really loved your fic! keep up the great writing! |
| Julia 2005-12-16 ch 70, anon. | abuseYou're not inadequate! Don't you dare to think that to yourself! And what?! So you have grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes but it's the way you're writing this story which is the most important thing to make a story great. And you have great ideas! What about the people who are educated and write with perfect grammar but have no ideas and write **? Do you think someone would say in his review,"Oh, what great grammar"? What is more important? Education and grammar or great ideas that ties you to a story so that you can't let go of it? And you're not a ** idiot! Sorry but I felt like I had to let this out after what you have written in your A/N in chapter 70. |
| lantiscod 2005-10-23 ch 100, anon. | abuseAs you’ve made it 100 chaps and I haven’t got the answer yet…My last question: why name it “FINDING ME”? |
| lantiscod 2005-10-23 ch 100, anon. | abuse“I was the first to…”-Sara has had so many first and she also wanted the first?! OOC! And…still long the way is… |