|Reviews for Kept Behind|
| Samwise O'Keefe 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Really enjoyed this.
Very different - I sometimes wonder if the Invisible friend idea would be a good variation on the going back in time type story.
| DarkenedRose24 3/14/13 . chapter 8
It was good. Makes me wish for more... and where were granger and weasly?
| Saint Snape 3/9/13 . chapter 8
This was a different kind of story. I enjoyed it very much.
| NagasMythReality 1/18/13 . chapter 8
First time I read a story like this. Absolutely loved it :D And very well-written too.
| Mreader 1/16/13 . chapter 8
I've had to have read this at least four times now (over the various years I've been on this site), I love it so much. It's an excellent story, and I hope you're proud of it :) you should be.
| Johanni93 1/5/13 . chapter 8
Good? Bad? Somewhere in between? I beg you pardon?! This story is BRILLIANT! I've read a lot of stories before and this was actually so good that I just had to review (and I'm telling you that I don't do it often... This is actually my third time to review,xD). Aww, how I wish I could write like you *sobs*...
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story with us!
| creamsley 12/16/12 . chapter 8
D'AWWWWW. I don't think I have much to say about it, but that was so very cool. Read all the thing in one go -_- That's exactly what I had in mind for the love/hate chemistry between them. And the idea is fresh.
What annoys me is the use of all the forced (and widely accepted, unfortunately) describing epithets, such as "the other man", "the dark-haired man", "the light-blue-eyed man", "the three-legged rainbow-haired science-loving woman". Nobody referes like this to actual living people. I do think that it's better to repeat the name twice than use those things - this would sound less irritating. Luckily, your works do not contain much of the stuff, for which I'm grateful.
I also do think that Snape might've been a little more worried about Dumbledore upon seeing his reaction to Harry's supposed death - after all, Dumbledore is arguably the closest friend Snape has in the entire Hogwarts.
Grinned a lot while reading this, Snape's sense of humour never fails to cheer me up)
| forTheLoveOfHades 10/13/12 . chapter 8
awww...i love it!
| Jodie 10/12/12 . chapter 8
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this story. Ghost!Harry is not something I've read about before. Whenever I come across an original plotline in fanfiction I do a little happy dance because they are unfortunatly rare. So yay! *happy dance*
This story also made me think of another ghost!harry plotline: Harry actually dies and becomes a normal ghost. Queue ghost!harry bonding with nick, harrassing the history teacher ghost (i always forget his name), hooking up with the grey lady, teaming up with peeves to prank the bloody baron, and bringing a little cheer to poor myrtle's death. It would have to be a light hearted comedy, and I doubt I'll ever write it. I hope someone else does because I'd enjoy reading it.
Back to your story: I love that this story has an ending! You told a consice and well-paced story, and that was really refreshing.
I also love how you characterized Snape! You kept him in character throughout this story. Somehow you managed to include some harry-snape bonding without forcing snape through an abrupt personality change. I love Snape being his grumpy snarky self!
Great work on this story!
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| oxy 7/10/12 . chapter 8
I thought I'd read all the good Harry and Snape stories out there, so it was a nice surprise to find this one. Clever idea, well written, and thoroughly enjoyable.
| outofcharacter 7/2/12 . chapter 8
Loved this, thank you :D I Especially liked your depiction of Severus Snape's character, I found him very likeable but yet canon, which isn't really all that easy to pull off. This was a fun story to read. Very well written, with an interesting plot. Well done.
| Lady Diana of the Moon 7/1/12 . chapter 8
What the HELL is wrong with Petunia?
Why is she suddenly acting like she cares about Harry?
| RemySevvyFan 5/17/12 . chapter 8
Harry really deserves the nickname "Boy-Who-Lived".
And I just love this Snape!
| Rosajean 4/12/12 . chapter 8
This whole story was utterly brilliant! Loved it!
| Everwild 3/16/12 . chapter 8
That was really good, interesting. Sort of reminded me of 'The Invisible'.