I love this ive read it many a times and it's just hit me that well me being me I haven't reviewed it. *sigh* I love lots about it how Laguna observes Squall and talks about how much he resembles Raine (which he really does) and mentioning Squall's stillness and linking that to Raine as well :) and the desrciption you added to the fic and Squall giving his report but his eyes being distant as they would be really well done with this

Heh, to me the story had a wistful tone in the beginning, but ended with a hint of anticipation, very nice ;~_~; sorry about not elaborating more, I'm kinda sleepy and my brain's not functioning well, but I did like this :D (Heheh, I haven't been checking on your work! Wah, 20 documents! I need more time to read ^_^)

And just a few things that may need checking on:

was something the boy [will] refuse to believe
~ would

thinking of [Winhil] and its quaint
~ Winhill

Great ficcy, Chickie.

Lovely concept, good spelling and grammar, and an overall good grasp on the story and situation. You won't find me complain about this. You did a fine job. ^_^