you know, i was just looking through my favourite stories and found this.

i cannot believe i forgotten this story existed

it is SO SO SO SO good.

gah! viva tyson/kai! haha!

thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this story.

gah! fantastic! brilliant! *rants and raves*

well bloody done!

A-AMAZING! I know I should've been reviewing for my math test, but DAYUMN-- I was totally engrossed by all 3 chapters that I just COULD not pull away.

You are an amazing writer. and I love all th ecrap you made Kai go through. Reading about his sleep deprived nights were hilarious (as it sounds more like myself, despite I have much less will and would totally extend my nap from 5 minutes to an hour..err..) but anyway~ I lvoe it. Love!

lots of aw's and wow's! this story was great! i loved it!! ur right tyson is sweet to let the classes thing get away..i was waiting for a thank u too, lol...it's awesome! great story!

Congratulations!

Your story has been selected for addition into the C2 archive, “Polished and Shining!”.

Listing in this C2 not only determines your knack of storytelling and innate talent for the written word, but it may give you the recognition you deserve. Your hard work and determination has paid off, and your story is not only compelling, but shines as one of those rare gems that fanfic readers often search for in vain.

I humbly wish you the best of luck in all your future, written endeavors.

We, the readers and fellow authors, thank you for this unexpected pleasure!

Sincerely,

~P

P.S. Do not apologize for italics in flashbacks, in fact, don't title the flashbacks as flashbacks, just write in italics. Italics are pretty universal in determining that you are going into the past. Your readers will pick up on it (since every published book has the same layout), so don't worry. Do try to keep your AN's succinct because they do distract. If you have dedications and so forth, they should be left at the end of the story.

Also, try not to over explain things to readers (such as why you did this to this character and so on), again, most are intelligent and will understand on their own.

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Oh my gosh! I just wanted to tell you that this was such a wonderful story! The depth of everything just gripped at my heart from all the angst and love that shone through with Tyson and Kai. The humor you created even through the angsty parts of it really made me smile, and I loved all the flashbacks and memories there were of them getting ready to go to University and whatnot.

It was so real and believable. The characters were protrayed so wonderfully and magically that it made me jump from the greatness of it all.

And of course - I loved the ending. How Kai wasn't able to voice his feelings to Tyson, though the very last line just makes my heart flutter with joy! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! It was amazing!

very interesting fic. how long was kai slleping anyway, after the teachers said kai could go home and sleep?

Wow I absolutely loved this AU fic!! The parts when Kai was exhausted actually made me feel like I was half asleep. You did such a great job portraying University midterm times. Ah too bad I'll be in the midst of them in only a few weeks from now T^T. Yeah Tyka!! Their characters really worked well in the setting I thought. AU can be very hard to do without messing up the characters royally, but you did a splendid job. This fic totally made my night. (I actually recommend to future readers to start at 11 or 12 and just read it straight through into the night. Kai's rambling actually starts to make some wierd sort of sense o.o And then, by the end of the fic when he's all rested, you've gotten your second wind, and it all fits perfectly. Lol.) So I just wanted to say thank you for writing this fic!! And best of luck on future projects!

According to the manga, Kai's face marks are face paint. Much to my disappointment. Because before i looked through the manga, I was certain they were tattoos!

I just got done reading this fic. Coincidently after you e-mailed me with your lovely thank you e-mail? I think not. ^_^ This fic was wonderful, truly wonderful. I couldn't help laughing at Kai through most of it, then wanting to pummel him with randomly thrown objects for just being so dense. He's going to be indept to Tyson for the rest of his life. Not that Tyson would have it any other way. *Beams* 'But more importantly...' 'He could sleep' I nearly fell off of my chair when he thought that. ^^ I thought he was gonna say Tyson. The typing was lined up so I couldn't see the next line right away. I really liked the kiss scence in chapter 2 with an out of it hormone-induced Kai. Yummy. Sorry this is so long but I gotta make up for the 1st two chapters. ^_~ Oh, as for the tatoo or paint. Definitely paint, there's too much fun you could have with that idea. And tatoos on the cheeks? Ouch. And as for that thing you mentioned in your e-mail, I am most DEFINITELY interested now. E-mail me back later on it if you want, I'm curious. This goes on my favorites too because I really enjoyed reading this, it was different than your Heat story but by no means any less amusing. Your great at angst and comedy. Oh, and your going on my alert list too. ^_~

^_^ i loved the story so much! Tyson was just adorable as an unsure lover! ^^;; that's why i love him so much! And yes, Kai's triangles are in fact fave paint because he pit them on after his father left him and he vowed to not take them off until he defeated his father. (Ot's on volume 4 of the manga ^^;;) BUT KEEP ON WRITING! LONG LIVE TYKA!

This story totally rocks!The coolest thing is that in the serieses Kai always pronounces his words properly, but your such an awsome writer you managed to have Kai shorten his words and it fitted!You totally rule!By the way two things:one the marks on Kai's face are some kind of face paint. And two I'm just curious about '**' I mean as far as I know faggots are a meal that my Dad and brother eat so who in the world decided that ** was an insult to gays?I mean your calling them a meat meal or something!
My head hurts.

gah! im so sorry i didnt review sooner!! amazing! i loved this story so much!! ^_^ very good work!

Wow! That was like...GREAT! I really enjoyed it actually, even though I'm not that fond of yaoi pairings, but you made me like it! Your story was also extremely well writen and Kai and Tyson were not completely out of character, which is a pretty good thing if you ask me!
Well that makes it; beautiful writing style, nice scenario, original too. I even put it in my favorites, so you can see how much I liked it! Keep up the good work it's worth it! well for us readers anyway... -^^- *Cheers!*