okay so half the story is real names (Jean, Scott, Kurt, etc) and the other half is all "hey Wolverine! careful Psylocke!"

very distracting! it kept pulling me out of the story that I was so deeply trying to enjoy! ps can you write a sequel where Mouse and Nightcrawler hook up I was feeling that tension.

I have read the story as it is now and am interested in seeing the end ofthis chapter, at least. Please, if you have time in the near future, would you consider continuing work on this story?

Sincerely,

Leah T. Labadie

P.S.-I really like what you are dokng here-it's something I havn't seen before- and I wish you luck and no writer's block

Are you ever going to finsh this chapter? I've read the rest of it, and it's good, but I'd like to see the rest of it sooner rather than later. PLEASE:)

Eh... The story was mostly well written, (the Kurt and Hank interchanges were very amusing) but Mouse herself had some problems. She had that 'Touch of Mary Sue' that makes a new character...irritating. And sadly, this rubbed off on the rest of the story.