I like Melek very much. Oh, this dream business is making me, as Alice would say, "curiouser and curiouser"! I love how you incorporate your own customs into a world Zelda fans know so well, and all your characters are very realistic. Great chapter!

~Avie~

I've noticed, you don't seem to get many reviews. Still i like it and i hope you continue.

Good prolouge. This is really good and i'm going to continur reading because i like it a lot.

Wow this story is even better than I thought it would be, I've said it before and dammit I'll say it again, you are extremely talented with writing stories, I'll never be as good a writer as you will be, this story spoke to me in levels that I never thought possible. However I'll continue writing my Grand Theft Equus story, I've been inspired to be a great writer as well, thank you my friend for many things, and I hope to read more of this story, keep it up.

~Vortus

Ooh, Sangethia's hiding something! I can't wait to find out what it is...

Great chapter, once again. I like Melek, and Ceridwyn is still very much not a Sue. *surreptitious hint* I would like to know about that prophecy, though! *end surreptitious hint*

Great chapter!

~Avie~

Wow this story is pretty interesting..I like your idea about what exactly happens b4 the WW..Loking forward to the next chpater :)

Oh, this is very interesting! I like Ceridwyn already! And odn't worry, she isn't a Mary-Sue at all. Your story thus far is a rarity in the Zelda fandom, considering how many cliches you see. And your writing ability is magnificent! The customs of the culture are completely original, as are the characters. I'm looking forward to an update!

~Avie~

Few fanfictions manage not to involve the game's original characters and yet be interesting.. yours has, so far. None of the characters sound as a Mary-Sue, and actually, the fact that you know what a Mary-Sue is is reasuring...

This is very well-written and above everything, is a new idea. One gets tired of the many romance, highschool and romantic highschool fics out there.

So please continue, this is really worth it and I'm happy I've found it. Don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews - sadly, the average fanfic reader (and writer) loses interest in the face of serious pieces of work such as this... be sure there are people who do appreciatte it and keep going!

I really do hope you continue writing. I notice you don't get many reviews, and it's not because your writing is poor. Your writing does not meet the needs of the "majority" of the Zelda community, who are young, immature and more interested in "Link goes to High School!" or "Can (Insert Real Girl Here) help Link save Hyrule?" Your diction sets a grave tone of urgency and your description is very good. Though I will say that you tend to overdo it a bit when you are describing fabric or garments. When Saga-...I really have no idea how to say her name...prompts the Sheikah to catch the eavesdropper, you won my respect as someone who obviously knows their Hyrule stuff. I also liked your own ideas about how Hyrule's nobility would behave, as well as adding to their culture. However, I don't want to jump the gun, but there is a tradition among Hyrule's Royal Family that every female child born into it be named Zelda(source: instruction booklet for zelda 2: adventure of link). Ignoring that will result in a loss of cool points, but I'm waiting for further depth and disclosure before I really let it irk me. Please continue writing this!

I can clearly tell your Santhegia is not a Mary Sue. I'm quite interested in reading more; I am fond of your style.