I love that! It captures the difficulty Obi-Wan must have had during that long period of time between Episodes III and IV so well!

Thats a very good poem. I like it alot.

I liked it! Great job!

Yes, Theed, if you want to put the poem on your website, you may. Only leave my name and email address () attached to it, and tell me where you put it.

Amy

One more thing. I'm building a fanfiction web page, and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind if I put this poem up? LET ME KNOW!

I'm in awe, that's all I can say. I love poems, especially deep poems like this one. I love it! I describes wonderfully Obi-Wan's life, and what he becomes. Oh, this was beautiful! Awesom, awesome, awesome! (10)