I read a couple of your fics, trying to decide which I would review (in return for you reviewing me, you see) and I chose this one. I think you have subtle description and the characterization was quite unique; you managed to do your own thing with their personalities and yet still make them recognizable. This stands out from others of this sort I have read--very well done.

-hails-

I didnt think it was cheesy because anything of Luc and Yuber i would read XP im just that way. But the cheesiness (O_o;) is lost in the description. And you make it so fluid, im glad you finished it!

it's certainly cheesy, but pretty much anything rules when done as well as likelihood allows. :) i liked some of your descriptions, and hope you'll write more in the future.

^_^
my friend Tala would love you~