Sad but beautifully written.

this was a really good story. it was really sad though. it is the only story that has made me cry. keep on writing i look forward to reading your future stories.

wow. that was so sad yet really touching you're a really great author you know xx

I'm very sorry for your loss. I know how it feels to lose someone in this way. Your story was very sad, but very well done. Good luck to you.

That was really sad but good job!

YOUR FIC REALLY REALLY SUCKED, COME ON, THE STORY JUST SUCKED SOOOOO MUCH!

GOD, HOW CAN YOU SLEEP @ NIGHT KNOWING INNOCENT PEOPLE ARE READING THIS!

GOD, but don't stop writing, i do this to everyone.

Nice Fic, i liked it :)

*sobs* That was beautiful. But... the only thing is that they were immortal. Still *sniff* a beautiful story