you can't stop this now! pleeeease go on, write the next chapter! I want to know what Sandy will say to Kisten and I want them back together fully and completely...and for good! please don't stop writing!

I just randomly clicked onto O.C fanfiction and you've updated, you have no idea how long I've been waiting to read updates. I still re-read Rhyme or Reason and your other stories. I am so excited! The show is over but you write some of the best stories I know! Amazing. Made my day!

great writing

this is amazing. i'm so glad you decided to continue it. i hope you'll upload a new chapter,it's very intriguing :D

OH MY GOD. So i was 15 when I read your fics for the first time and author alerted you. I am now 22 and freaked out a lot when I saw this update, AMAZING. PLEASE CONTINUE.
Whenever I think/talk about fic, I talk about trinity is god who wrote the most amazing stories for my first OTP.

Thank you.

*goes back to read everything for the *** time*

OMG! This story is totally killing me! I read the whole story and it is amazing! even though it is so sad how things turned out but I really like it...(btw carter should just disappear) :D

please update soon! I cannot wait to read more

Wow. I literally could not believe it when I read the email that you had updated.

I had to go back and read from the beginning. While this story is killing me, thanks so much for writing it! It's hard to see our beloved characters in this situation but it is certainly interesting. Almost like a Twilight Zone episode.

Love Sandy's new look. Like, I know he got it in prison and that's bad. But he's so sexy. haha

Please update again soon. I need more insight into this Carter situation. (Ugh. ;) )

please update soon :)

OMG! I CAN WAIT TO HAVE THE NEW CHAPTER ANYMORE, PLEASE KEEP GOING, POOS KANDY I LOVE THEM AND CERTAINLY HATE A LOT TO REBECCA WITH ALL MY HEART!

Wow. Fabulous. Very dark- I loved it!

wow just read all of these... awesome... please continue unless its done but i don't think it is cuz i didn't see "complete" but you are a REALLY good writer bravo

i'm loving this so far :) will read the rest when i have more time.

Oh and by the way (:D) my name is Rebecca and i assure you its R-E-becca :D not Rubecca :D lol. great story. x

Sorry its taken me so long to review i didnt notice that you hasd updated, so i apoligize for the long time between reviews, im always checking back to see if you've updated and somehow i missed this one. gawd, ah well ive read it now and was astounded as always.

One thing...I despise Samantha yo write her so mean i cant wait till Kirsten comes down and knocks her off that pedastol shes put herself on, i guess you intended for her to be disliked. Sandy mustve done somthing serious to her.

The voice inside Sandys head makes me chuckle. "She had some deep rage, she needed to see a therapist" and "Shes such a Bitch" straight to the point in his mind i guess.

I like how whenever shes wailing on him, he always thinks of Kirsten. Although the divorce paper route would be a good one to write in my opinion, because neither of them will want to sing them, he'll have mark give them to her and she'll demand to go and see him. Go Kirsten, that could make for some fun reading.

Anyway I hope you'll update soon were all waiting for you, take a choice out of which one you want to update, but personally: This story, Rhyme or Reason or The Sin, all amazing and al waiting for next chapters.

I promise i wont review so late next time, as a belated birthday present to me you could updare :) kidding. Hope to read a chapter soon

Toodles x x x

Hey, just saying happy birthday!

Hope you celebrate with a chapter of something lol!

Panz

PS. You know that bad ass novel you hinted at?

I said it wouldn't happen cos of exams...I've written 45 pages! It'll go up when I write the beginning! lol

Great story so far, can't wait for another update!