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Marish89
2008-06-06
ch 31,
abuseAbsolutely love your fic. I'm glad everyone got a happy ending. Are you going to write a sequel?

I'd love to read more!
re
2007-11-22
ch 4, anon.
abusethis stuff is intense. totally SVU. it seems like a real episode. Great writing.
tanya2byour21
2007-08-07
ch 31,
abuseI loved it.
Tanya
PaceyW'sgirl
2007-07-17
ch 31,
abuselove this story. i cant wait for you to write a sequal to this story. i love Josh and Olivia and Elliot as a family. would really love to read a sequal to this story in the near future.
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2007-07-16
ch 31,
abuseFINIS? What the hell? No... write more... NOW! I'm suffering withdrawl and it's been less than a minute!!
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Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 29,
abuseI feel so sorry for Joshua. The sad part about it is that even though this is only fan fiction, children really do have to live like that...
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Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 28,
abuseNow that you mention it, Liv is a little trigger happy.
Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 26,
abuseI know she's only doing her job but I really don't like Sarah. Something about her seems off... like... I don't know but I don't like her.
Hominem
Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 25,
abuseI must really commend you for how you're portraying Olivia's relationship with Huang. Because he works at SVU and can at times be "friendly" in an aqcauintance way it's really hard to put up the barrier between patient-friend. Huang is truly a caring person and I think he knows just how far to go with Olivia, as for her... you're capturing her emotions beautifully. Just thought you should know. Good job.
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Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 24,
abuseElliot bought a house... or he has a house that was passed down to him... one that he wants to renovate... something like that... I'm right, right? Yup, thought so...
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Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 23,
abuseOh good... didn't want little Joshua hearing that lingo! LOL! Good Job
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Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 22,
abuseOh naughty.. kitchen table
Ad Hominem Argument
2007-07-16
ch 21,
abusePoor Olivia! I really hope she talks to Huang
Hominem
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2007-07-16
ch 20,
abuseYeah Liv, buy a house so you can get some!
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2007-07-16
ch 19,
abuseWhy? All she needs is Josh! *Majo pouting*
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