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Kichi Penn
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
once again, I am amazed by your ability to write angsty.
Ninja No-Name
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
My mind is not deep enough to find hidden meanings. So I'm going to guess that because Itachi left the kunai behind, Sasuke could have commit suicide. Please correct me if I am wrong. -_-
Renea
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. I love your portrayal of little Sasuke
Gyatso15
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
This was a very nice read. The way Sasuke made the transition from "afraid of the dark" to "praying for darkness" was very well-characterized, in my opinion. I liked this.
Kaira-chan15
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
I loved it! Very well written and an original idea. I enjoyed reading it! :D
DragonCrazed
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Nice introspection on both their parts.
Basically, my thoughts concur with all your other reviewers.
Amazing Job, muh friend!!
HannahSakura.Pinoy
2007-04-09 . chapter 1
Good
n00b-masta2112
2007-02-21 . chapter 1
GREAT! I love it!
Krizzie
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
one late review again... but i love your writing style! how come i only discovered it now?
Closing Trial
2006-02-08 . chapter 1
Oh nice!
Fantastical Queen Ebony Black
2006-01-13 . chapter 1
I often come across fics from a while back, and think 'how the hell did i miss this??' This is one of those fics. :) It was very well described, well characterized. However, I believed Itachi could have killed Sasuke without the kunai. A hard enough blow to the temple that he definitely would've been capable of probably would've done fatal damage. A harsh beating could've done it as well. But those wouldn't have been as fast, I suppose.

Good job though! :)
wellduh...
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
Great work picking apart Sasuke's thought processes. Wow. He's kind of hard to figure out, isn't he?
Coordinator-Girl
2005-11-21 . chapter 1
T.T omg i loed it its going to my faves *pats you on the back* you did a nice job
link no miko
2005-04-16 . chapter 1
Wow. More awesome Sasuke introspection. Dangnabbit.

I love the "He forgot the kunai" line. That's just heart. I dunno why, there's just some kinda depth in there that I can't name or something, something more to that line than what it actually says.

Dangnabbit, it's almost Itachi introspection too, in a very odd way. *sigh*

I will not like the Uchiha's, you can't make me like them!

Thank you for the fic though! Twas very good and awesomeness and short but made you think. I love that like, so much.
sna
2005-02-15 . chapter 1
an interesting perspective and very well written. looking forward to your other nine!
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