This is such a promising start that I really hope you continue it one day. Keep writing.

Hi there.

Even if I've been gone from my RK story, you've been gone a while too. Do you think that you'll get back to this?

Other question... anyone still on RCUS? I haven't been able to find it or my password now that I'm back in the fanfiction circles and I was wondering.

Oh well. I hope this story hasn't been dropped, though I'm not one to talk about long delays! :D

~Kasi.

i love your story, wandering year fics are difficult to find and when you do they often lack a bit in character and story. This one is very good. I cant wait for more. Keep up the good work. See Ya!!

Ok, so maybe cruelty is catching... Sorry sis, no new reviewer here. Scratch that,I am not sorry.
Ok, I may be bad at staying awake while doing homework but my threats are NOT to be disregarded. Shall I threaten you publicly? Crud, I already did that… I refuse to have promises made to me ignored! You haven't even worked on the story since before I did my Millikan Lab… which was… (Checks word document)……oh crap that was yesterday. Wait, no, two days ago; 1:00am doesn't count (Ok, 12:59a.m.) Regardless, you need to work on it. For your health. If I have not seen significant progress on it I will start to write it again. That should make you ashamed of yourself; You know the incredible amount of homework I have. What was the purpose of this again? Oh yes, UPDATE. Or else. I think I'm giving too many threats… I'm going to start carrying them out. Soon. Hehehe, Dad thinks I'm working on homework! Bye now!

Um, wow. Very, very good. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Also, I commend you on excellent grammar and spelling. People like you make me happy and not fear my English degenerating. ^_^

Hey, hey!

*pokes in arm*

Are you going to write more of this? I'm under a new name, but I was in the RCUS, and I really would like to see more of this story. I've reviewed twice under Kasifya, since you probably don't remember me.

Anyway, the point is, I still like this story and I was hoping that you'd get around to writing more of it!

~Kasi.

Interesting point about irrational night time paranoia. I would've thought Kenshin would try to arrive places at night because the darkness would conceal his identity better. I never really thought about the fact that people get jumpy in the dark. It makes sense!

Kadsure is an interesting OC, kind of the Meiji version of Federal Express? In his travels, I'm sure he's heard LOTS of stories about Battousai, so it'll be fascinating to see his reaction to the genuine article, especially since Kenshin isn't a remorseless killer anymore.

You've set up a great dramatic situation. Update soon!

Ello! I like the begining but you haven't updated in so long! Just wanted to remind you we're waiting! No pressure tho'. I can't wait to see what happens!

Ok you said something bad about my fic now I say something about yours... My opinion it's confusing not by just a little bit but by a whole lot! It's nice that you put the japanese terms in it I love to learn Japanese...But you need to follow the plot more not go off in other directions that's what you did I hope this clears things up for you. Also I am not deleting my story so screw that Idea.

(frowns, scratches her head thoughtfully) I remember this story. I remember reading it when it first came out, thinking it was great, and that you should definitely write more...

I liked the tone and the characterisation, and I especially liked Kenshin's thoughts on the safety (or not) of daylight. Even if you've abandoned it, I just thought I'd say what an interesting concept you began in just three chapters.

Well, you've got a promising story here. Not a great deal's happened yet, so I can't really comment too much. However, I quite like your writing style. Although I can't for the life of me find a definition for "inveigled". Whilst possessing a voluminous repertoire of words is doubtless something to be proud of... sometimes it can be taken to excess ^_^.

Also: if you like making up new names (and want to make sure they can actually be pronounced in Japanese), then you might like to grab JWPce

Oh wow this is SUCH a GREAT story! I love your style, I love your characterizations, I love your plot, I love your pacing!

Good descriptions. Anime? Yes, unfortunately, I have never been interested in it. Tried reading some, but didn't enjoy it. Regardless, the story was good. Two enthusiastic thumbs up!!

Okay, now I'm totally hooked! I was just thinking that within this week you'll update, and you did! Happy, happy! It was wonderful. Your little cliffy there is suprisingly not annoying. Or is it really a cliffy?:p

You are evil. I am very disappointed in you. I told you to wait to post your story until I read it! Just because I was asleep...! Eh hem, anyway... I really like the chapter though your ending leaves somethng to be desired. Rushing to post the story will not help. I think that most of the readers find that they like it when authors take the time to really finish what they write. nice job though!