Nicely done, and it's true. If it's genuine, it doesn't matter if a person does what they're supposed to do. :D

Lovely. Just like poetry. 5 out of 5 stars

wow. this was really sweet. i love Amita/Charlie stories and you capture thier personalities perfectly.

Aw, that's sweet. Lovely read.

Nicely written. Not much else I can say except I like it. =]

Wow! That was really cool. Very original, yet incredibly unique. I have talent. Keep it up!
(Fanfiction name: Agent-Cool)

Nice job...the length and the repeated use of "you shouldn't" works well...Charlie definitely would say something like that comment about his family towards the end

AWW! that's so cute! and so charlie!
~freedom

good fanfic

*gushes* cute! I love it!

TS

That was good. Charlie seemed very much in character.

That was awesome! I could really see this scene happening on the show...whenever Charlie and Amita hook up. Great job!