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chibi Charlie-chan
2008-06-15
ch 10,
abusethis was an awesome story ^^ i really liked how you handled the characters through their pain. very good job!! keep it up!
Sara-Greg-Sandle
2007-10-10
ch 10,
abuselove it
WitchGirl
2007-04-04
ch 10,
abuseVery captivating story. Downloaded it all to my ipod and read it in a day. I couldn't take my eyes away. I loved the scene with Greg and Sara in the cabin, absolutely adorable. Great job, I'll look for more of your stuff too.
Obsessed-With-Greg
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abusedid u have 2 bribe thez peeps to reply to ur story or r they just that stupid waste of space
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 10,
abuse“They will,” he told himself, “They made it this far, they’ll make it all the way.”

LOL...Again, if he only knew what was to come.

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 9,
abuse"For the life of him, Greg could not remember being more tired, sick, and in pain, then he was at the present moment. "

If he only knew what was to come. LOL.

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 8,
abuseHorrible torturing! Mean cliffhangers! Evil Emmi!

Awesome work.

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 7,
abuse"I always enjoy watching my friends get pounded to a pulp,"

Lol. Sounds like she could be one of *your* friends. lol. Seriously, though, great writing. I love your work.

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 6,
abuseThey're so darn sweet.
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 5,
abuseHave I ever mentioned you're my favorite author? Even out of like novelists and stuff?

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 4,
abusePoor Greg.

You do it so well.

By the way, COME HOME!

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 3,
abusePoor Sara.

Seems to be the theme. Poor Greg. Poor Sara. Poor Greg. Poor Sara. Poor Greg, Poor Sara.

You really do love to torture them.

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 2,
abuseYou shoulda named the other one "Lilo" so you could have "Lilo and Stitch". :P

Poor Greg. You're so mean.

Jenny
Jenny70529
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseAh, and so it begins.

Jenny
buffgirl73
2006-06-11
ch 10,
abuseThis got better and better as it went on. Going straight to the next story now - such fun!
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