 kitvis7 2008-01-12 . chapter 1 Aw. Sweet. |
 MLE XD 2007-12-30 . chapter 1 eh i'm too lazy to log in rite now, but aw! what a cute fic!! |
 tori 2007-07-26 . chapter 1 I loved it so much please make a Part 2 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE |
 AAR 2007-05-12 . chapter 1 This such a cute story. I agree with you there isn't enough Ed/Winry fics. All those stupid Roy/Ed or Ed/Al pairings just make me want to puke! |
 Katie B18 2006-08-04 . chapter 1loved it |
 ;) 2006-05-30 . chapter 1 ;) |
 Aleksandra 2006-03-29 . chapter 1 Well, I'm glad I read another fic of yours. This one is also nicely done and, unlike 90% of stories here, it's not a grammatic genocide, lol. Seriously though, I like the fact that your works are so well written, and so cute without being sappy. I wish more EdWin's would be like that.
Please keep up the good work and post new stories soon! |
 LovingTheLord91 2005-10-18 . chapter 1I love it! Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
 Darth Hello Kitty 2005-09-20 . chapter 1 Aw! How lovely! Keep up the good work! |
 Agnes Green 2005-05-17 . chapter 1aw. . that was soo cute.. i especiall liked the "surprise" winry had for ed.. serves him right! lol.. good job ^-^ |
 Anna 2005-04-19 . chapter 1 That was so sweet! And very believable. You captured Ed and Winry's characters well.
--Anna |
 Maiyo Moon 2005-02-25 . chapter 1C-Cute! >.< This is one of the best FMA fan fics out there! You stayed true to the characters AND had good spellin'! XD Good show mate! I give it a 15/10! ^_^ |
 Tiger Mononoke 2005-02-19 . chapter 1 Heh...its all right. ^_^ But I gotta agree, that last line did bother me. Winry just can't possibly come between the brothers...I feel that Ed's tie to his brother is FAR stronger than Winry's...to me, very obvious! But I'm a huge fan of Ed/Winry nonetheless...so good work! Die Roy/Ed...::seethes:: |
 neko56 2005-02-18 . chapter 1this was a cute story! the ending is cute, though i wished something would have happened... |
 via-chan 2005-02-18 . chapter 1 aw...so sweet! i love ed/winry! and you're right about there not being enough of it. it's all ed/roy instead(rolls eyes and grumbles) let's see...what else did i want to say? oh right! nice job, except for that last line about maybe not telling al. that one just really bugged me for some reason. |