I don't know what to say. This was really original, and nothing at all like a lot of the stuff that's popping up in the South Park fandom these days. The way you told most of the story from Stan's point of view, even though Stan was dead, was really clever.

I'm gonna definitely read a lot more of your stuff. Great job!

-Ben

i gotta say i dont blame kyle for killing cartman."Told the tester that your Jewish ass deserves one because of the Holocaust?"- god! i woulda killed him too! too bad stan died, tho. :( fucking sad.

whoa this was deep man. so tragic, made me tear up a bit. it was good being from a POV. Awesome job XD

That was not what I expected. . . .I'm so speechless. . . .that was really good. I like the message that it sent and although, I know how much Kyle dislikes Cartman I had never seen murder in any of his intentions. But it was good. I liked the POV too. . . .I don't know what else to say. Usually I have so much to say, but. . .wow. . .
Jess a.k.a. RedGem270

Myeh...that made me cry!

DIE, CARTMAN!

You are SO sweet! *Hugs* Here you went and wrote a challege of mine that I hadn't even posted yet! Now that's enthusiasm to be creative! Gosh... this exceeded my expectations. You see, when I write out a challenge I never have an exact storyline in mind. It's always just a plot outline. This one: Kyle's fed up with Cartman and kills him. You extended above and beyond that to create this total hearbreaker. You should be damn proud of yourself. And oh! That part with Stan dying in Kyle's arms was the icing on the cake. How (sad) yet completely SWEET was that? Poor Kyle... And putting it in Kenny's point of view! Never saw that one coming. This was so good, a fav for sure.

Woah... Very good... Love it!

Me-Ladie

That was good.It took me a while to see whose point of view it was but it was cool how u set it up.