Beautifully written. Very understated. Poetic. Thanks.

Nice to see them talking but not talking again. As usual, the imagery is evocative and the atmosphere very much in keeping.

Not sure how I missed this earlier, but worth the wait.

I really appreciated seeing you play off a specific episode & the things left unfinished. The realism in your description, with the tiny details, make it all feel so real.

The ending, while not canon, was a potential ending in so many of the episodes, it makes sense that this could have been a place where they cave in to all the building emotion & connection between them.

Another good one! Thanks.

I like this story. Logan never really takes the time to deal with the fact of killing a man after Haven (other than his little half assed talk with Max at the end of the ep). I guess the way the show deals with it makes him seem less real: like he is playing some video game and he beat the bad guy. Murder is something he should have had a more difficult time dealing with, in my opinion, and I like the way you showed this.

thst was very well done. i really liked it.

I love the contrast between Max's definition of "right" and Logan's.And Max's comment about him "slacking"..just perfectly in character

While it deviates from canon at the end who says they did not at least become closer after what happened in Haven. This could explain Why Max and Logan came to their mixed up feelings in PL and IAIAaC episodes. Beautifully written and glad you have not forgotton us DA fans.

Beautifully written - awesome imagery as always. I love the way you write the complexities of Logan's attitudes to life and the complexities of their relationship. Lovely! Thanks very much!

Except for the last part, I could really see this happening after Haven. It's always nice to find something new in my inbox when I come home for lunch. :)

bravo, i really liked tis. logan in a pissy mood seems to happen a lot, so max's upbeat attitude seemed fitting. great job.