very good

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I love it.

I really liked your story. Unfortunately people like Dumbles and Ron never do wise up. Very well written.

awesome. i love it. you really did a good job, and you tied everything up really well. excellent.

i thought things in the epilogue were a bit rushed, but since it's an epilogue and not actually a part of the main story, it can be forgiven.

There are many stories that involve a disgruntled, darker Harry, but this the only I read until now in which Harry doesn't mmellow up and forgive the ones who betrayed his trust (And I approve. Come on, how many of them are:
'Harry, we need you again, we're sorry for before.'
'No, you manipulated me and/or betrayed my trust. F**k off'. Exit, stage right, return when situation gets more brown and stinky:
'Harry we're REALLY sorry for before. We're REALLY gonna make it up to you somehow. We know we don't deserve it, but please help. You know we were good to you until we've thrown you with in the trashcan'
'All right, I'll destroy the Baddy of the Day, but I'm not doing it for you, I'm doing it for the innocents. But if you try really hard, we're eventually be friends again in the forseable future, because I regret a little giving you the tonguelashing you minimally deserve and making you realise what a*s have you been.').
I don't agree that the ending has been rushed. While I generally favor longer stories, this one didn't need to be drawn out excessively. And I really appreciate the Epilogue. It gives a much bigger glint at the aftermath, a feature sadly lacking in most other stories. Good job. 8/10

Goof story!

wow, this is one of the best fics i have read

good work!

I LOVED this thanx for sharing I really enjoyed it x

Awesome, though a little too bright halfway through for me.

Great story, glad you completed this.

wow this is a truely unique and amazing story. while you also made harry cruel in some respects its to be expected from his position, and in the ned hes just a caring father that never knew love until he was broken and lain bare

That was briliant!

This was really good, The idea and then everything that happens is nice, I was kind of sad that things didn't get better for some, but you made it work perfectly.

Great story, and I like the idea of a misguided Dumbledore over a manipulative Dumbledore as it requires less plot changes. I loved the beginning, and having Hagrid killed was a masterstroke for drama! Good show old bean... (it's a reference)...

Much enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing.