Nice. The HPBL(P) wasn't really supported though.

AW POR BOY...3 GALS...WHAT HARDSHIP..ALMOST FEEL SORRY FOR HIM...ALMOST...CAN YOU IMAGINE..3 OF THEM PMSing AT THE SAME TIME LOL ROLF!!

GOOD STORY SO FAR

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Out of all the Azkaban stories I've read, this is my favorite. Too many have Harry forgiving and helping out the British Wizarding World even though they treated him like ** and betrayed him and it really annoys me. Just because there is a supposed prophesy hanging over his head is no reason for Harry to have to feel like he has to kill Voldemort, especially after everything that has been done to him in his life. Many of the other stories have the characters stating that Harry has to do it for many reasons, including the death of parents he can't even remember. How about all the other lives that Voldemort has affected and those people that have had family members murdered by him or his followers? Why don't any of them attempt to kill Voldemort instead of laying it all on a teenager? It's so ridiculous how everyone would try to make him feel guilty.

This was a truly refreshing story, even though I would've preferred it just stayed with Bella/Tonks and not include Ginny. Oh well, can't have everything.

very good

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I love it.

I really liked your story. Unfortunately people like Dumbles and Ron never do wise up. Very well written.

awesome. i love it. you really did a good job, and you tied everything up really well. excellent.

i thought things in the epilogue were a bit rushed, but since it's an epilogue and not actually a part of the main story, it can be forgiven.

There are many stories that involve a disgruntled, darker Harry, but this the only I read until now in which Harry doesn't mmellow up and forgive the ones who betrayed his trust (And I approve. Come on, how many of them are:
'Harry, we need you again, we're sorry for before.'
'No, you manipulated me and/or betrayed my trust. F**k off'. Exit, stage right, return when situation gets more brown and stinky:
'Harry we're REALLY sorry for before. We're REALLY gonna make it up to you somehow. We know we don't deserve it, but please help. You know we were good to you until we've thrown you with in the trashcan'
'All right, I'll destroy the Baddy of the Day, but I'm not doing it for you, I'm doing it for the innocents. But if you try really hard, we're eventually be friends again in the forseable future, because I regret a little giving you the tonguelashing you minimally deserve and making you realise what a*s have you been.').
I don't agree that the ending has been rushed. While I generally favor longer stories, this one didn't need to be drawn out excessively. And I really appreciate the Epilogue. It gives a much bigger glint at the aftermath, a feature sadly lacking in most other stories. Good job. 8/10

Goof story!

wow, this is one of the best fics i have read

good work!

I LOVED this thanx for sharing I really enjoyed it x

Awesome, though a little too bright halfway through for me.

Great story, glad you completed this.

wow this is a truely unique and amazing story. while you also made harry cruel in some respects its to be expected from his position, and in the ned hes just a caring father that never knew love until he was broken and lain bare