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I don't understand how you can possibly have so few reviews on these stories when they're so fantastic! I really enjoy your work.

Love this story,as I love all of yours...Great job... can't wait to hear another one from you...

I like your stories-they're so good! You write really well, though you must already know that by now. I liked this story, it was good. The part with the arrows in the beginning was funny, though not so much for Elladan...

Nice little story - I'm glad you finished it all in one go. This being able to feel what the other twin is experiencing is jolly useful - shame more people/elves can't do it.

Jay- I am SUCH a fan of your stories. You captures the voices of Tolkien's characters in such a way that I think he would be proud if he were still alive. Please keep writing!

What a neat story-and no cliffies, just a good, tight, tense story with nice characterizations and a good plotline! I was half expecting multiple chapters... but you surprised me! (grin)

Nice job-thanks for sharing it with us! Poor Elrohir... it must have been his turn. Usually in caves, it's Legolas who gets hurt... (grin)

loved it!

great writing as always!

Lynn.

Though it was a rather miserable adventure for the gang, it made for a very entertaining story for us. Nice work, Jay!