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| Quill-32 2005-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an intricate casefile and lots of nice G/S. I like the gradual pace of Grissom deciding he's ready to do something. I'd be interested to read more by you. |
| faith ;D 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's one of the best story I've read recently, and trust me, that's saying A LOT! The case are just perfect, and the twist and turns is great, i couldn't get the suspect and the connection right up until Sara come up with that note. And the character ( p.s. Grissom and Sara) their interactions couldn't be written in a better way, great job on writing this fic, hope to read some more from you soon!1 |
| CarbyluvYTDAW 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. I really liked your bathroom scene. The sexual tension was bursting everywhere. Can't wait to read more from you. |
| The Bard1 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWow... Simply Wow! Awesome...superbly written...it could very well BE an actual episode of the show. You captured every character perfectly AND created a believable and interesting plot. Oh, and who can forget the absolutely stunning GSR to boot! I hope you will be writing more. Kudos! |
| whirligig 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis story should have tons of reviews and I'm amazed it doesn't already. Awesome writing, perfect characterization, great cases and written better than a lot of the shows, in my opinion. Stunning job; please write more! |
| imz 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abusethis is...*so* good! very, very well written and perfect characterization. it read as if i was watching an episode...way more satisfying then most of the real episode cases in a very long while. you write like the writers *used* to write on CSI. it's brilliant and shows just how well gsr can be woven in...just flawlessly done. |