This is an intricate casefile and lots of nice G/S. I like the gradual pace of Grissom deciding he's ready to do something. I'd be interested to read more by you.

It's one of the best story I've read recently, and trust me, that's saying A LOT! The case are just perfect, and the twist and turns is great, i couldn't get the suspect and the connection right up until Sara come up with that note. And the character ( p.s. Grissom and Sara) their interactions couldn't be written in a better way, great job on writing this fic, hope to read some more from you soon!1

That was cute. I really liked your bathroom scene. The sexual tension was bursting everywhere. Can't wait to read more from you.

Wow...

Simply Wow!

Awesome...superbly written...it could very well BE an actual episode of the show. You captured every character perfectly AND created a believable and interesting plot. Oh, and who can forget the absolutely stunning GSR to boot!

I hope you will be writing more. Kudos!

This story should have tons of reviews and I'm amazed it doesn't already. Awesome writing, perfect characterization, great cases and written better than a lot of the shows, in my opinion. Stunning job; please write more!

this is...*so* good! very, very well written and perfect characterization. it read as if i was watching an episode...way more satisfying then most of the real episode cases in a very long while. you write like the writers *used* to write on CSI. it's brilliant and shows just how well gsr can be woven in...just flawlessly done.