There are tears streaming down my face as I type this review. That was breath-taking. Literally. The most tragic Ob-Wan and Qui-Gon story I have ever read.

Obi-Wan's last moments were what really got me.

'Anguish tightened around Qui-Gon's heart like a vice. "I'm sorry, Padawan," he said, choking. "Please forgive me."

"Yes, Master." His words were barely audible. Then Obi-Wan smiled faintly, took one last shuddering breath, and went limp in the Jedi's arms.'

Amazing work. You should be proud.

I remember reading this story on another site. Read it the first time in the evening and it stayed with me all night. Then I reread it in the morning. It has been more than a year ago. I have returned to your story several times since. And the effect is always as powerful. A single misguided decision and an opportunity, and a life, are lost forever. I'm always left wondering if Qui-Gon will be forever alone, from this point on. If he will, or can, even live.

I just wanted to say thank you. Your story touched me in a way that very few things I have read have done, in fanfiction and otherwise.

Poor ObiWan! Really well writen!

I've read this story so many times I've lost count, yet it gets better each time. I absolutely love it! It has a wonderful concept that you turned into a beautiful story. Love it, love it, love it! :-)

This is great. Really beatiful

Oh I love it... It's such a beautiful story. It had me crying in the end, please write more SW stuff.

It's funny though, I just read a LotR fic, with the same theme of sorts, funny to see two different takes on this...

I took some time this weekend to re read this fic. And it hit me just as hard as it did the first time I read it. I still got a big lump in my throat and had to reach for the kleenex. This is one of those fics that will forever be a "Classic." So, again, thank you for writting and sharing it with us.

I am completely speachless.

This nearly made me cry. Poor cold Obi-Wan... I liked the way it moved from Qui-Gon's guilt to Obi-Wan's, and how neither of them could accept that it wasn't their fault. And that final image...

I loved this story so much! I read it at starwarschicks.com first, and I loved it!

This story has always been a favorite of mine, and now I've finally come around to review it. The emotions in this story are just so tangible, and, yes, I almost cried. Get that a lot, do you? Angst is a beautiful thing if written properly, and you've done an expert job at it.

Anyway, I just want to mention something I found very interesting about this. The drug that poor Obi is addicted to is Erebus, which is, if I remember correctly from The Odyssey, the land of darkness between the earth. I find that interesting that you use it, and was very excited when I found that while looking over the Circe's speech part. Wonderful story you've written.

This story is so magnificent that I've read it probably once a month. You are truly a gem of a writer!

God! Poor Obi-Wan! Really wonderful story, but sooo sad! Sigh! (wipes a tear). Congratulations!

How the hell could you kill him?

*wipes away a tear* Very good. Sad...but good.