Perfect.

Oh hun! That was beautiful! *points to her teary eyes.* It was JUST what I needed today... So beautiful, so well written.

"I'm Never letting you go again." ...that just... arg gotta stop before Mrs. C. asks what's wrong *L*.

I adore it, THANK YOU! This is probably the best present I've ever recieved...truthfully. It means more sentamentally. so..,yea...

Wonderful! Action, conflict, happy ending for the resolution! I've always especially liked this pairing with its roller-coaster of emotional turns. I'm so pleased to see it reach a satisfying conclusion. Mentally, I hear the soft music as the book closes..."and they lived happily ever after because they were togther."

Congratulations on a fabulous tale!

aw...you write so beautifully. and i'm so happy someone wrote about ione, i've been meaning to but i've got no inspiration. anyway, this was a great piece, i hope you continue with it or something along it's line. i can't wait for more on arkology revisted too. update soon!