This needs to be an episode. Also, you've got the characters so perfectly in-character that I can envision all of this happening. But... are you alive? :o

Okay summer has fully started, ended, and we're now into 2008, so you are allowed to start writing for this 'fic again! It's good! Keep it going! Don't let it fall into the pit of half-finished works!

Are you aware that aparently the season 4 finale is Sheppard and McKay find themselves the only ones in Atlantis and they don't know why? Looks like they stole your idea

So, it's a new year - what happened to the updates? :o)

EH?! what shall happen?? update fast, i mean this! you better do it! or, or, or i'll start prodding you with a TELEPHONE POLE! haHAH!! *tries to lift the the telephone pole, but fails miserably* fine, *grabs a piece of toast* take that! and THAT! hahahaHAH!

...point taken? not that i would resort to violence *snicker* and great by the way, i do enjoy your stuff!
*returns to toast beating* (:

*flails* You're leaving us like this?! Oh. Well. I guess... finals are pretty important I guess... No pressure ;) Best wishes, and hurry back when you're done!

well hell, aint you pessimisic... half-closed? lol, besides, those doors are pretty huge, half closed/open is quite a space!

oh, loved the line: “Well, at least I’m in good company, aren’t I?” LOL! its just like you and me... you being McKay, trying to get your point across (asparagi), and me being Sheppard - the sarcastic one with a counterpoint to every counterpoint... lol, reminds me of Doug's room in the morning...

AWESOMENESS! and yes the curtains... ;)

I seriously love this story (not that the three reviews I left before this one didn't tip you off or anything) and I certainly hope you update soon.

I sat here grinning throught the whole Star Trek homage. Beautifully done, if I were you, I'd consider turning this into a script and sending it to the folks at SGA. It really is good enough to make it on TV. Entertaining as hell..

*gleeful laughter* Oh, I wish everyone wrote them as well as you do! The whole back and forth conversation/arguement was brilliant.

Please keep up with the updates. The waiting is killing me. I finally got chapter five printed out. When will you get the other chapters written?

Haha ok I've read through. This story is awesome. I loved Sheppard bungie jumping and McKay skateboarding through the stargate X3

you know this is almost like an actual episode of SGA-- I'm giggling like a goof to the point of distraction but I'm still following along. Gawd I love McKay and Sheppard. Haha.

NICE. finally, the next chapter!! this one was really good, we all know that Rodney needs a good squirming moment every now and then. builds character.:)
ah. yes. the ever-pursuing writer's block. it has becoome a rapidly spreading disease throughout fanfiction...dun dun dun dun! well, it looks like prodding works! so, if i start hitting you with an even BIGGER stick will you go even faster??!!
*snickers* wasn't there this great big stick in our back yard?? or was it a tree? heeheehe...update really soon, i'm really enjoying your story!

So, where's chapter 16? :) it's a good story, quite funny, i like it !