Wonderful story. Thanks.

That was lovely. :)

Wow! It's hard to imagine that 10 years later this story is still thrilling readers! A friend recommended it to me and I jumped right in. Such a well-written adventure! Teamwork, terror, alien monsters, Goa'uld technology, character whump, a sprinkling of affection and angst made for a wonderful read. Your characterizations were spot-on, and the humor felt natural. Bravo!

Good job. I liked how you used Jolinar's memories.

"Carter," he said, "If anyone ever asks...you didn't throw me out the window. I jumped."

lol! Good story!

Liked it, especially his comment about the window.

hehe :)

Great story! Well written and entertaining. I liked it! :)

I really enjoyed this story. Great teamwork with Sam and Jack.

Oh my god! i just found this story (so i hope you get this) but it was ace! really enjoyed it, the charcters were spot on and the banter was just right, like you'd find in the show, and that last scene in chapter 7 was so cool, my heart was thumping...seriously...thump...thump...thump!... well done!.

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Amazing! Story. I just finished reading the whole thing, and it's absolutely perfect. Great job!

Wow, what a great fic! Lots of action, plenty of drama and suspense, all with a great, unique storyline. I also loved the little bits of humour dispersed throughout. What a great read! :o)

Great story! Excellent plot, good characterizations... very well done.

Wow. You rock. This story had such a unique dark quality to it, very compelling... Awesome writing, wicked dialogue and perfect characterizations too! I hope to see more from your talented writer brain:)

Exciting story - glad to find it.

hey, i'm looking at the date you wrote this and it was like 5 years ago so i dont know if you'll even get this but i just have to say...wow 1 of the best fan fics i have ever ever read i was so hooked 5.02 am- i had to stay up and read it all. it was so in character and oh my gosh i thought i was actually reading a real stargate episode! so going in the favourites list...i dont hink i can expain how wonderfull and fantastic this story and your writing is...i'm just going to say..thankyou..im going to go read your other sg1 fan fics now:):) hope you get this.