|Reviews for How I Found You|
| LittleCopperRidingHood15 4/20/10 . chapter 1
WOW! this was really good! awesome! :)
| Amras Black-Fox 8/25/09 . chapter 1
I admit, this is actually pretty good. I was worried at first but you made up for it at the end. I cant offer advice on it because in my opinion there is nothing you could have done better
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 8/24/09 . chapter 1
| Taco Chocobo 4/11/09 . chapter 1
You wrote that for a teacher? Good thing s/he's not homophobic.
I've always been confused by the "you POV" thingamajigaroo, but I liked it anyway!
| danii-chan 4/3/06 . chapter 1
WOW. SO cute! I like this one too. XD
| Jessica 2/4/06 . chapter 1
Sasuke is not gay why don't you people get that dumbasses
| BoxerBitch 12/31/05 . chapter 1
Okay, now I totally loved this one! You showed your teacher up with this story! *adds to faves*
| Lady Samurai 4/24/05 . chapter 1
| akilana 2/19/05 . chapter 1
I really loved it so sweet cinda OC but really sweet.:)
| martinique 2/17/05 . chapter 1
I don't think you've exploited the 'You' POV as much as you could. Some places seem to be lacking commas, and in others the punctuation is a touch confusing to the point where it breaks up the otherwise good flow of the piece. I'd recommend a beta.
The story itself was sort of cute, but it relied (in my mind) too heavily on the usual cliches, instead of utilising them. I think you can do much better, perhaps write slower or come back to it again after a few days before posting it.