Effective writing. Powerful emotions.

Naww I love Spike/Dawn! You really should continue, you're a good writer, and you've got a great story.

Does Spike have to die again? Cant you write a 2nd ch where Dawn goes to LA and finds him? Pretty please

ahw that sucks... is that all?

damn that one was cool..

so sweet too. it would be awesome to continue it somehow but its still awesome as it is

maw! that was soh damn sweet, man! love it!

Buffy's right, Dawn truly would be smited by the gods of fashion if she wore Andrew's clothes. Excellent story. I love the idea of Dawn finding out this way. Wonderful.

Beautiful.

that was beautiful...and kinda awesome...great story

Oh, fuck. What an awful way for Dawnie to find out. Poor thing. (Loved the fic.)

*sniffle*

Lovely story.

"Sarah's nostalgia suddenly bursts into movement, her hand flying forward to slap the table. She doesn't strike Dawn as someone who lets herself be sad for long; maybe it's a slayer thing." This paragraph reveals what Dawn thinks of Buffy without being judgmental. That first line is really nice.

This was sad, but it offered closure to the Dawn/Spike relationship.

Nice.

Wow... this was an excellent piece. Nice... i loved it but it should be continued. Have you ever considered turning this into a longer fic? I could help if you would like.

Really good! You should definately continue!