utter crap

okay, you man not know it, but your fic is lested under D/X character pairing. That is how I found this fic
So considering the great interaction you had between Xander and Dawn you had in the first part, you may understand my extreme disappointment with the story when it ended in Dawn-based Xander-bashing

Well written, and a good take on what happened post-Sunnydale ... but it reads like a prologue. Please tell me that's not it -- it would be great to see where things are going from here.

Interesting start and a good foundation, but since you're apparently shipping Dawn and Spike this will be only part of the story that I read. I wish you the best of luck with your writing.