Wow... I read your first chapter like a year ago, but here I am again! And, boy, I think I went into rehab and then suffered from amnesia because that last review (which I wrote that year ago) was really obnoxious! But I have no idea why I am telling you all this so...you probably made this chapter a long time ago but I'll feel guilty if I don't review it. Good job, I like the humor and the fact that my name is in it! Oh btw, did you see the movie? I think it was great! Anyways, umm ordeurves or however you spelled it is spelled "hors d'oeuvres" Just so you don't hurt any Frenchies' feelings...rambling...

Ah, now I see your point about whether or not a half-human daughter of a witch would have some good in her. I still think it's not likely, bu hey! It's a parody! And a funny one at that. The rebels were hilarious, really they were. Any chance of a "Magician's Nephew" parody?

Wonderful story, I really liked how although it was funny, it was not overly silly. And I like how you borrowed lines or themes from other books, the "back at the ranch" bit made me laugh.

Hee hee, "A tip-off that you're in a rip-off." Clever, mate.

Wow! I like this story a lot.

Great story!

Update!

Great chapter! Please update!

Wow, do you study theology or something, or do you have a church leader as part of your family? You've got some pretty good points going here! The parody's great, I'm just imagining a very murky Narnia where false prophets are stirring up reveloution; it's pretty scary isn't it? I'm still finding it funny by the way, and please update this soon. :)

Great chapter!

Great chapter!

WOOT! WOOT! Go George W Bush! Uhhuh ya dats right! Yup he is a Christian! LOL. Wow! I loved your story! I could conect to it in like a gajillion ways. Other than the bush thang, u used my name for their last name except that it is spelled differently, I LOVE C.S. Lewis, and I LOVE Tolkein! Keep it up! Now I am gonna go read ur second chappie so update soon!!

Cool fic, it's funny. The Queen is called Gladys, that says it all really :D . I like the fact that they're all aware of the parody and are trying to escape it. And all the Mary-Sues being classed as illegal immigrants. And I've found someone who isn't slagging George Bush off, which is unusual,me being English, making no personal comment on the situation here. Oh and the bit about the sermon on Hebrews, that was cool. Anyway hope you find this useful, you post some more soon, though going of the published/update dates you've been super speedy anyway. Adios

Great story!