I found this to be a good read, and am hoping you will continue with it. You've got an incredible sense of charater here, and the way you've written Logan is very interesting.

Nothing to vague on his past with Max, but it is sad. Now I know why he is the way he is. Tima is another interesting character, b/c i've never heard of an X series trying to get back to Manticore.

Her startling revelation was a good eye opener for her. Logan going back to help her out when she was in trouble made sense. he's a good guy at heart.

Will there be more?

Thanks for posting the rest of Tima's story up Darwin, it's a very good intro to your X10 series:)

Hey, great story. Keep going.

I loved the souped up version. Keep 'em coming. You're one of the 4 best writers on DA ff.net.
Star24, You, WyldeGod, Peking Noodle.

Always happy to see your name pop up on page one.

Please keep writing this and your other fic also. You're one of the best writers.

I loved this story too :)

AAAAHhhhhhh! you killed max! hey you should do a sequal where max and her kid are aliveand they find them.

WOW! THAT IS, I MEAN, WOW! it's a great fanfic, omg! It was pretty sad when Max died, but still, it was powerful. You should write more!

Great Story

Man this story rocked!!! I have nothing but respect for ya dude!!!!!! Have u written ne thing else?? will u write ne thing else?? Am waiting on the edge of y seat!!!

This story kept me glued to my screen all the way thru and I printed it off for my friends and they all love the story.