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| Kai-Nscara 2005-06-19 ch 3,  | abuseGreat story so far. It jumps around alot, but still good! I think you should do more with Carolyn. Everyone talks about her in the story,and Dennis looks at her, but that's it. Just a suggestion. Well, can't wait to see an update! |
| pink_zelda 2005-04-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like it a lot. It would just fit Cordelia's luck to find another ghost apartment! I think it's very good, very freaky (in a good way) and I also think you should focus a little on Carolyn, to see what she's thinking with Dennis back. |
| Gabbie 2005-04-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseI liked this chapter too, though it was a little confusing with the jumping of weeks. Keep it up, I'm curious about the vision. ^_^ |
| mistymidnight 2005-04-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really like this one. Please update soon! |
| Miss American Pie 2005-04-07 ch 3, | abuseAw...that last part was so...angsty. I liked it though. Great chapter. Please continue! |
| Passionatedarkness 2005-04-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseReally loving this. Please continue |
| gidgetgirl 2005-04-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseI had a little trouble following around so much with the jumping, and the flasing back, and Cordelia's (?) vision. Interesting challenge response. Donna seems an odd name for a little girl, but given that she was born in the fifties, it makes sense. |
| angel-cordy 2005-04-06 ch 3, | abuseThat was a cute chapter. Please update again soon. |
| Imzadi 2005-04-06 ch 3, | abuseI think Carolyn has to accept that Dennis couldn't have been there for her and start to forgive him. He & Donna are a delightful pair. So who are these people in Cordelia's vision? |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-04-05 ch 3, | abuseNice I like it. |
| angel-cordy 2005-03-23 ch 2, | abuseThat was good please update this story again soon. |
| LittleRedFlyer 2005-03-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseog sososososo good Its a really kool twist and im glad that u updated:) lots'o'luv lilred |
| Gabbie 2005-03-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is so good! I'm liking this! And how the tow apartments have a connection! Very origional plot! Awesome, indeed. |
| Miss American Pie 2005-03-14 ch 2, | abusegreat chappie. i really like the whole part about balloons and wesley getting scared. lol. it's odd but my favorite line was he'd get his money back on the other side of never. lol. i'm a dork. |
| Imzadi 2005-03-14 ch 2, | abuseSo Dennis is Carolyn's fiance and Donna's father. Cordelia should put two and two together pretty quickly. I'll bet Dennis would be delighted to know he has a daughter and to explain to Carolyn why he disappeared. If at all possible, I'd like to see a good side of Lindsey in this. |