Hey! I just wanted to tell ya, me and Silie made a registration for us writing stories together (almost always humor). Our name is, "The Children of GUN". Anyway, I'm informing my closer friends online, because the reason we changed our name from "Sil and Cel INC" and the story from, "Team Flash Insanity" to "Organized Chaos" is simply because someone kept taking the story down... Anyway, I just wanted to inform you of that.

O.o oh argh dont know what to say... ur thats right! sorry but i cant help but laugh cause when i read that part where kayla went NOO! then i was envisioning it all anime style and it was funny XD

good job! Keep up your good work. This chapter could have been a little longer, but oh well! Yoou did good, so YAY! I'll see ya later bye!

I liked the ending...twas cool! Oh, I'm pretty sure Shadow can die, just not by old age. Not sure, but I'm pretty sure of that now...

What a darling little angel that Kayla is...it brings a tear to my eye... Good first chapter. Thanks about the compliment! You rock too! Well then...to the next chapter!

very cool story!keep up the good work!

There’s the tragedy it was kind of a happy ending in a way I guess still I liked it and I’m putting it under my favourites.

Hi. Ya I know I've been reviewing your stories often but that's 'cause I like them. Please continue. ;-)

very good chapter!update soon!

Pretty good! I'll keep waitin for the next chapter! See ya!

I ends next chapter? Pity it’s good. One thing it’s a tragedy but nothing tragic has happened yet so where’s the really sad part?

HAHAHA I love that last part its funny... Oh and I forgot to review the chap I did for Campfire... But I wrote the chap so it would be kinda stupid to review it :P

Someone said I was a pervert again? Doesn't matter... nehehehe

Hello! This story doesn't seem to sad yet! And those mouse people freak me out... Its like... They're mice... Oh! You should make one of them named JERRY! ^_^ you did good! MUHAHAHAHAHA! I'm off to read your other thingie! See ya!