I've never seen that, interesting. You did well with the exception of one part(where Ranma realizes his mistake)

interesting

I really caught this late, so there isn't much to say, but although it was awkward and could have used some more solid grammar, the whole thing was interesting eough to keep me reading to the end.

A lot of people like to pick on Pluto, she's set up in such a way that the Western mind almost instantly distrusts her. However, you did a good job of justifying her actions, and managed to gritty up BSSM without losing much of the key girl's show stuff. I wish you had kept the romance, but it seems good the way you did it, and you filled in most of the notable plot holes.

Good fic, though it could be a bit longer. Why all good things are too small? ;)

good story. much enjoyed

Not bad. Ciao

that whole respect thing ranma had with Genma was IMO totally out there. I didn't like it t all. Changing genma's personality so much without any good reasons or explanations, the vagueness(what about the other of Nerima's residents reactions) doesn't seem right. I did like most of it so far, but this spoiled it for me so I'm gonna stop reading.

Great story. Pluto as a fanataic fits IMO. After all, who would you stick in charge of something like the gates of time? The best soldier you got or the fanatically loyal soldier?

Kitty Kat, I read the first chapter, sounds like a DnD party. Good! You know when I looked up you profile earlier, I looked up X0, not Xzero. Thanks for helping out. And Betty says your myspace profile is uber cool.

excellent piece of work. excellent ending. will there be a next one?

Sorry for taking so long to come back and review. While I didn't entirely like the direction that the story seemed to take after the fifth chapter, I do want to compliment you on a job well done. It takes a lot of work to finish a story. I should know.

In the end, the characters all made choices, and were judged by those choices. For good or ill, they stood or fell according to decisions they made.

For this, I applaude you. Good job. Hope to see you work something in the future, but if not, know that you've done well with what you've written.

Great great stuff, thank you for writing that. Kept me up till like 5 am and killed my next day, but thanks for writing that! :)

And my imagery of Ranma on his return for some reason was a better dressed version of Akuma.

Very, very good. One of the finest crossovers I've seen.

Excellent story!
Great crossover, felt a lump of anticipation and angst through the last half of it, and can hardly express in proper words how elated I am to find a Good crossover with Sailor Moon.
I agree that Setsuna is a bit fanatical, and do not see anything out of character with her ordering the Senshi to kill a normal person because they may or may not affect the future Crystal Tokyo in a negative manner.
Lastly, I cannot thank you enough for not choosing a Ranma/Akane pairing, or for making Ranma a Senshi or Chosen Husband of one.
Keep up the excellent work.
May your wit and quill never dull.

A very deep story, very deep. Mind you it is great, it's just ... Dark.