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Clawstrike590
2/2/10 . chapter 13
Awesome story. Can't wait for an update...
PeasAndCheese
10/1/09 . chapter 13
First of all, I'd like to thank you for giving Xiaoyu a proper treatment in this chapter. I'm not sure if you did, but I still appreciate how you were considerate of her feelings for Jin. Most of the fics (Jin/Julia ones) I read had either turned to bashing Xiaoyu and all; so this was really a refreshing read.

So thank you!

(I think you added some canonical scenes or quotes in this chapter; where Jin told Xiao to fulfill her dreams.)

I kind of had the feeling Julia would see them like that...poor girl...
PeasAndCheese
10/1/09 . chapter 12
"Yeah, Jin is hot… but who the hell'd wanna be beneath his fists!

The very thought of it made her grimace."

Oh my...Rila you are awesome...

I hope to know more of this "Caden" person.
PeasAndCheese
10/1/09 . chapter 11
Huh. What a coincidence for Jin to find Julia in the nick of time.

In my opinion though, there's no such thing as "coincidence" only "fate". :)

It was a nice reprieve for those two. I love the subtle play of UST XD and how they share their lives quite openly.

I'd imagine Jun and Michelle to be very good friends in the past :).

I wonder what Kazuya/if Kazuya did anything to Michelle then...
PeasAndCheese
10/1/09 . chapter 10
Another great chapter! There are so many scenes that I love here: Jin's dream, Julia's confrontation with Xiaoyu, and her encounter with Kazuya (believe me, I got goosebumps while reading this part).

And thank you for adding another wonderful character to the bunch - Asuka! Now I wonder how Julia will manage when Rila and Asuka make a tandem of chaos...spirits...give Julia strength.

Hopefully, Julia will be alright though...

(I just realized...I think I skipped a chapter here...oh well...)
PeasAndCheese
10/1/09 . chapter 7
Oh my...Jin taking (albeit untouched) coffee abandoned on a street (?) ? That's something I'd like to see XD

I find it adorable in a way. :)
PeasAndCheese
10/1/09 . chapter 6
I love that the Jin in this fic smiles more and laughs more (If you count chuckle as laugh in his case).

I guess Hwoarang and Steve looked really ridiculous to render Jin in chuckles eh?

I have an idea who the man in the purple suit might be.

I commend Julia for her heaven-sent tolerance over Rila. God bless the girl!
PeasAndCheese
9/30/09 . chapter 5
OH my...this chapter is made of so much WIN. Romance plus comedy in one piece...I can't stop grinning like a fool.

I love the trio comic of Steve Rila and Hwoarang. And the last part where they were singing that song! AHHAHAHAHA!

Going to the romance department, I just want to say how much I want to hug Jin. The guy's so naive and so adorable. Especially when he was trying to look for the keys. I'd imagine him scrambling from wall to floor to picture frames and potted plants.

I think I have an even dirtier mind because I was thinking Jin might be looking under Julia's skirt instead.

What else can I say? I love this chapter. I love it. :)
PeasAndCheese
9/30/09 . chapter 4
I sense Hwaorang/Rila in the making eh?

Oh Jin...your poor thing...the guy's so into Julia. :)
PeasAndCheese
9/30/09 . chapter 3
I love the part where Julia was looking heavenwards and prayed to the Spirits for Rila's safety. I don't know whether I should find it funny (because of the way Rila's making such a ruckus) or pray along with her.

Marduk deserve that. Thank you RILA!
PeasAndCheese
9/30/09 . chapter 2
OH RILA! I love her! X D
PeasAndCheese
9/30/09 . chapter 1
Dear God Almighty. This chapter is made of awesomeness. I thank you that you put in this idea...this possibility that Julia may have witnessed what happened to Jin in T3.

So far, your characterization on both of them are good...better I should say. I love (and yes..miss) Jin's kindhearted ways...the Jin that used to be innocent and pure. :) Wonderful choice of words to describe the awkwardness between their almost kiss! I adore Jin even more because of his realistic portrayal of nervousness (hands at the back of his neck...the clammy feeling). I even like it better...their almost kiss...it held so much potential and mystery and the possibility of what could've happen if they did kiss.

Though one thing frustrates me: 48 reviews? Man, again, where's the justice?
zURuUruZuRu
12/7/07 . chapter 1
updat this soon ok? its been 4ever since u've updated. :(
Kadeana
6/14/07 . chapter 3
I just got a chance to read chapter 3. I just love Rila. One word can always sum Julia and Jin, complicated. I hope I have a chance to catch up on this story soon.

I love it. Craig Mardock = Bigfoot
Carver
5/28/07 . chapter 12
uPdAtE biyatch. :P
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