I have these questions to ask you. 1. What was the plot of this fanfic? 2. When does it take place? 3. What were the ages for those that were in this fanfic? 4. Just what was going on when it started? 5. The person that was doing the speaking or narrating throughout this fanfic was Neo-Queen Serenity, right? 6. Just what was she doing in her room at the Crystal Palace? And why? 7. Just where were her friends at? And why? Be sure to answer these questions. If you want, you can choose which questions you feel like answering at this time. And any left over can be answered throughout this fanfic anywhere. And I will be having a few more questions to ask you to answer later.