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| Ginaaaa 2008-02-23 ch 3,  | abuseThat was really sweet, I love the babies names. I like how even though Drake's a ghost, hes still a teacher at Magic School. And of corse, I love that Cole is the babies father. Great job. |
| Christine Ruud 2007-07-25 ch 3, | abuseSad...so sad...yet hopeful. |
| Christine Ruud 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseAh! I love it! |
| Phoebe_gurly 2005-12-25 ch 3, anon. | abusejust a suggestion but if u want to go back and change the spelling of charlie. for a girl it's spelled charley. i know two charlie's/charley's and one is girl and one is boy. ley is girl and lie is boy. |
| ethereal girl 2005-05-05 ch 3, | abuseyou make up such nice stories, though this was kind a sad - but very good nonetheless |
| Mousewolf 2005-04-13 ch 3, | abuseAw... |
| Mousewolf 2005-04-13 ch 2, | abuse*pouts* More Drake! |
| katbaby 2005-03-04 ch 3, | abusegreat chapter; love your stories; thanks! |
| Barb6 2005-02-23 ch 3, | abuseI think this is my all-time favorite story you have written! I cried after reading it for the first time and that is rare for me. Just a woderfuly story for all of us who still believe in Phoebe and Cole. You did a much better job giving them their love that the Charmed writers ever could. Thank you for writing this. |
| Snow 2005-02-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo sorry I was busy recently. Sweet story. It's touched to know Cole's been waiting for her in her heart. I'm happy that they have twins, and I love the detail they name their daughter Charlotte, a very good idea. I was hoping the Muse would inspire you a new idea for a new story after you watching ep "The seven year witch", but you wrote a new story sooner than I expected. I still hope you'll start another one after this 'special' ep. |
| rena 2005-02-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseloved the story can't wait for the next chapter for the other story your writing |
| Nightcrawler8 2005-02-20 ch 3, | abuseWow...this was such a sweet story. You know, I'm hoping that Cole might show up again sometime after "The Seven Year Witch". I mean, from what I read in the spoilers, it was Cole's influence that got Phoebe involved with Drake in the first place. Who's to say that the writers won't find some way to have him come back again? Anyway, I enjoyed this very much, and I looked forward to reading more of "yes, phoebe, there is a utopia". |
| RakeTheSky 2005-02-19 ch 3, | abuseEven though Cole will always be with Phoebe and his children in spirit, it's still sad that he won't be there physically for his family. I loved how their daughter's name is Charlotte; its original and now that I think of it I can almost see how this ancestor of Phoebe began to turn Cole. Now, more of 'Utopia', please! |
| PheobeColelovers 2005-02-19 ch 3, | abuseThis needs a sequel. He has to find a way to come back. I mean, it was a good, sweet ending, but he has to come back to all three of them. Please, I'll give you a cookie if you write a sequel. Do it for the girl stuck at home because I just got my tonsils out. Ayways I love this story. So good. It's wierd. After watching that episode with Drake, I thought about the same thing. I'll shut up now. Great Story! |
| PheobeColelovers 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseloving it! |