Hey Jude goes perfectly with your work. I enjoy listening to it as I read your chapters. CONTINUE! GREAT WORK!

Well, good idea, but you need to update some more. In terms of suggestion, I think just have slow development as Keitaro remembers his promise with Motoko, which should take 4 to 5 chapters. While at the same time have Motoko fight within herself as Kenjiro moves on her. In the end Motoko stays true to Keitaro. Then have a major event when the truth is revealed and good and happy ending. Anyway, hopefully that helped you out.

good fic, nice sequel yeah... but your chapters kinda short...but its nice...

Not long ago, I read your "Another Promise", and found the story very enjoyable despite some problems with word choice and a few grammar problems. I just recently read "Forgotten Promise" through the current chapter and was happy to see that your writing flows more smoothly, with fewer of the problems I had noticed earlier.
I'm afraid I take issue with your apologies for chapter length and "useless description". Complaints about chapter length may only be a reader's hunger to read more of your writing, to get to more of your story. Your narrative parts nicely set the mood and create the scene in the reader's mind (mine, anyway).
You may have a reason for writing Kenichi as you have, but given Motoko's and Keitaro's personalities, I would expect any of their children to be a bit more respectful and courteous. True, children of five or six years are still learning how to behave and usually do not respond well to the situations you have created for him, but his personality clashes a bit given the characteristics of his parents. He behaves like I would expect if he was the son of Kenjiro and Naru. Just my personal reaction.
In any case, add me to the probably long list of readers hoping to read more of this story soon. Thanks.

An awesome work Motoko-chan (arigatou for letting me call you that)

Motoko was some angry, nad Naru's a sore loser, she shoyldn't try to get Keitaro, he's Motoko's!

Anyway, congratulations

Keep your awesome writing skills!

See you Next chapter

By the way, who do you think would win, Kenshin or Motoko?

It's nice to see you updated after all this time. Sure it was a little short, but hey, I've done shorter chapters that were nothing but filler. . . so I really am in no position to complain.

-Ninja Hampster

Yay new chapter. Arigatou. Though it was pretty short i still enjoyed it. Thank u for coming back to it and Ill be here always waiting when decide to update. Ill wait patiently. Until next time, Oyasumi Motoko-chan

I'm glad to see you're back. The story is going great. I wish you got to see mine before i took it down. I would have liked to get a review form you.

You aren't going to make it turn into a Kei/Naru Motoko/Kenjiro fic are you?

well nice

I really love this story...I was so sad when it looked like it was discontinued but now I'M FREAKIN HAPPY! Please, Please don't give up on this story. It sucks to see alot of Keitaro/Motoko stories abandoned or incomplete. Not finishing this in my eyes, would be a tragedy.

I Love Another Promise... and I love this sequel.

Great Job! Update soon!!

Hoo boy, looks like things are really tense right now, and will be looking forward to what all will happen next with both of them, and to see how things might get resolved, hopefully in a good way, before a bigger blowup happens.

Okay in about the middle of this chapter I changed my thoughts from in the last chapter to thinking Yuri was going to be adopted or live wiht Motoko and Keitaro but as soon as she gave Kenichi a Naru punch or in this case a Yuri punch i went back to thinking the are going to get together

I'm randomly getting the feeling that in the future of this fan fic your going to pair up Yuri and Kenichi and that mabey if the story gets far enough into the future that Yuri's going to get the Sakabatou.

It's good but who names their dauter yuri? you do know what that means right?