I've been waiting for too %$@&% long!! Make more chapters!! I command you!

Great story, but i'm disapointed.
Only two chapters *sigh*. Either you've forgotten it, or just given up...both of which are a shame, because i wanted to see what happened with Kali and the mirror etc.

Need...More...Now...

nice story

Great story keep adding chapters please

do you know what hapened to the story Robin, my Houkounin by shinigami-Virus

Whoo!OMGoodness,this story is wonderful.Please,PLEASE continue!I love all your stories but this is like my second fav.,second to True Awakenings.Keep it up!^.^

Not bad. The Virus guy did make an excellent story. I agree with the other guy that this story IS indeed in capable hands. Make more!

ditto

This chapter was great. I hope that you continue.

Great prequel! Keep updating. I just wish I could see a new chapter for the original. Ah well, Shinagami will return someday.

well, do it big then , because i wanna see more, great chapter, and update soon, later days!

Finaly got to read it but not the original. oh and my story is taking alot longer than I thouht it would...sorry if I made you think I had it ready to completely write.

Ah, it ** me off that "Robin my Houkounin" kept getting deleted. Anywho, this is a great prequel to that story. In this chapter, I noticed a slight error when you get into the second scene, you say Raven was with a girl whose name she didn't know, unless she had forgotten, you'd already introduced Kali, and then you introduce Kali again. If it was just Raven forgetting, sorry for looking into it so much. Anyways, this is a fantastic fic, and so wonderfully written. Best of luck with it!
-blackmoon36

Hey, you updated really fast, thanks! So um, great chapter...I can't think of much more to comment on other than the fact that it was good and I hope that more reviews will encourage you in continuing to update quickly (that most likely was a run on sentence, but what the hell most people don't read this part). I was wondering if the mirror missing was taken by the white rat, but I guess Raven just moved it while throwing crates. So, I thought you caught Raven's reluctance to admiting she was a vampire very well. You also portrayed her stuborness with drinking blood quite well. The one thing I didn't understand was the whole bubble thing when she was flying over the Atlantic Ocean. I'm most likely forgetting something from either the show or from "Robin my Houkounin". So umm like I said before. . .Good job and keep up the good work (please).
P.S.-Sorry for the horrible spelling and grammer