I like your story so far! BTW, i was reading your profile or your homepage or whatever you want to call. GO MINNESOTA GOPHERS! i love the Minnesota Gophers. Anywho, update soon!

This is really creative and original, using a tax collector as the antagonist in a cinderella story. Are you a bible reader? Keep up the great writing. The only thing I could say to improve on is the grammar, there are just a few punctuation mistakes here and there but it happens to even the best of us. Yeah, don't be discouraged by anything because this is a wonderful piece of work.

This is good.

yay! Jenn brain not working properly. Jenn like story. Jenn think you update soon.

very nice: i can see where this may tie into Cinderella. interesting combination of tales, im interested to see wehre you will go with this.

Hey hey hey! Nice story you have going here. I like that her father is a little bit, well, not evil, but kinda bad. It's those cool little things that make stories like these so interesting and cool. KE EPU PTHE GO ODWOR K!

YEY! I read this yesterday actually, but I couldn't review becuase I had to disconnect from the internet (damn you dial-up! (shakes fist at dial-up)) but I read it and LOVED IT! your writing style is fantastic. I love Aubree, she has real spunk. The riddle sounds interesting, and very confusing. See, I can't do riddles in my story, because I always end up not knowing how to use them in the story and I'm not even clever enough to make a good riddle! But the riddle was good, long, but good! LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENS! UPDATE SOON!

This story sounds interesting... please UPDAT SOON! I want to see where it is going. The chapter was short, but very VERY well written. if you are uploading once a week, shouldn't you be uyploading today? PLEASE!

Great! I can't wait to see what happens next!