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| NicB 2007-01-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseI really liked that story a lot. Great use of actual dialogue interspersed throughout the beginning. |
| -The Midnight Lover- 2005-12-30 ch 4,  | abuseWell done. You've captured what Lee and Kara share perfectly. I love the story, perhaps more to come? |
| Nytel 2005-10-11 ch 4, | abuseNot the ending that I was expecting, but still good. |
| Nytel 2005-10-11 ch 3, | abuseOh, what a shock! |
| Nytel 2005-10-11 ch 2, | abuseGreat. I specifically loved the line 'He wasn't surprised, though, when Kara shot him a look that could freeze a sun.' It fit in with the story nicely. Off to read chapter 3. :) |
| Nytel 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseNice, off to read the next chapter. |
| adafrog 2005-08-25 ch 4, | abuseGreat fic. I love how you had them arguing instead of actually saying what they think. It's so screwed up Lee and Kara. *rolls eyes* |
| adafrog 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Thanks. |
| fallingfromelysium 2005-05-08 ch 4, | abuseNice! I liked it. Lee and Kara bantering is the best thing ever. Could there be a sequal on the horizon? |
| blackiebrens 2005-03-20 ch 4, | abusevery much enjoyed. i really liked that you brought foreward the fat that they do kind of speak in a code. never really saying what they mean, but the other one gets the truth behind it. |
| tmelange 2005-02-27 ch 4, | abuseFabulous. I loved it. |
| dawn2dusk 2005-02-26 ch 4, anon. | abusewell written. I really like how you characterize and demonstrate Starbuck's and Apollo's friendship. |
| Darlian 2005-02-26 ch 4, | abuse"You really are a brat, Kara, but there's nobody I'd rather have watching my back." "Yeah, well, right now I'm supposed to be seeing your back as you head for the Life Station, so leave." Yay! :) Loved the part about how Lee and Starbuck were using anger as code for their concern. Thanks for writing! |
| Lattelady 2005-02-26 ch 4, | abuseThe new chapters are wonderful. They sound so much Like Lee and Kara, you've really got it down. I was sorry to see the Fin at the end of chapter four. Wish you'd write more. |
| Raquedan 2005-02-26 ch 4, | abuseIs this staying as just a "friendship" thing, or is there something more coming up? I'm really liking it so far! |