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BobWhite 5/4/08 . chapter 1
your work never ceases to amaze me.
epalladino 2/23/05 . chapter 1
This series is really, really great. I have just one quibble: in general your spelling and grammar are quite good, but you consistently spell the word 'idea' as 'ideal'.

At first I thought this was a typo on your part, but as far as I can tell, I've not seen the word 'idea' spelled correctly in any of your stories. Since, in general, you write quite well, I can't figure this consistent mistake out.

Several examples from this story:

"...they had no ideal how long they had been unconscious..." (This should be 'no idea'.)

"...let’s just go home…any ideals?" (This should be 'any ideas'.)

"...You see I got an ingenious ideal..." (This should be 'ingenious idea'.)

Minor quibble in an excellent series of stories. I apologize ahead of time if English is not your first language. Beth Palladino
nancy drew 2/20/05 . chapter 1
Great story.Looking forward to Strangers Among Us.I love your series that you have been writing.Stiil looking for Nancy Drew though... Love Ya,Bye
kel 2/19/05 . chapter 1
i am so confused. but in a good way...i think. lol u seem to like " to be continueing" this story. it is drizing me crazy. but * sighs* we all no that i love it. lol post the sequel soon!
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