Um... just so you know, the term for the thing Raven is going to do with the Kethnetic water is scry not scurry. Just thought you should check it out. I might be wrong though.

I really love this story! And cannot wait for the next chapter! I liked the relationship between cyborg and Chire'ni, because he deserves something..
And Malorek has been a wonderfun mix between the two dragons! :D I wasn't sure at first, but now i really like him.
Are you gonna write the vacation soon? i really hope so, i bet it will be wonderful!! Raven and her problems have been a bit hard to follow, but very interesting! I absolutely loved Zarcoma, but still felt a bit sorry for Terra, even tho i don't like her at all. :/ And it's pretty funny how Starfire is enjoying interesting Robin so much, i wonder if she undrestands what making out sometimes leads too. *Sigh*
All in all, as previously stated, i love your story! and have been reading it all up to this point, but have always been behind until now, and just caught up! so sorry that this is my first time i've got to review.

Wow... I have so much to say about this story, that if I tried to write it down, I doubt I could convey it properly. It's brilliant.

...Skull... Wonder why, but whenever I read that word I picture... Well,a skull. It's especially disturbing when a friend reads their story to you and describes a make-out scene-much like you did there-,asks for my opinion, and then listens to my endless thoughts about carcusses. Then they ask WHY I brought up dead things and then when I mention skull they get the TOTALLY wrong idea-that their reader's, whomever they may be, minds will venture where mine did...
It only takes... about another three words to draw me back into the paper world...
By-the-by, I LURVE both the stories, and i hope you continue the series... At least reward us and give us a trilogy. Come on, you can't say you haven't come up with at least a FEW thoughts for the 3rd book.

Live, laugh, love, eat bacon,
A-Z

. . .Ok, now I'm thuroughly confused. . .

Ok, Chire'ni is a dark elf. Shenira and Chire'ni are one in the same. Practically since the beginning of the story you've been setting up raven as avalona-reborn and judora as the half-demon, so how is it suddenly Chire is avelona and raven is the half-demon girl reborn?

Who ever said they were going to end up heroes? All you did was give them powers and say they couldn't harm innocents.

Good chapter anyways.

I know you don't need me to bumb up your reviews, since you got like 600 already, a figure I can only dream of.

All I can say is that your story is basically a legend. If it wasn't based on a cartoon that already has copywrite, this would be the perfect book. This was EPIC.

I know you haven't been on for ages, but if you wrote a trilogy...well I'm sure alot of people would faint with happiness.

I LOVE THE SHAVING CREAM!
But i don't know why...

You've...been reading Harry Potter 1, haven't you?

NO! Srry, I ovrreacted, but, still... R U gunna write another one? Please? Please? *puppy eyes?*

Wow. Both of your Raven/Malorek stories are great. Where did you get your base for your stories though? It's very interesting.

Thirty... nine... chapters... but I made it! Excellent fic!

great story

WOW. all i can say is this one much surpassed teh first, and that one was friggin awsome!
-edge

Dude lyk this is the 4th or 5th time i read this story. No matter how many times i read it IT STILL ROCKS! *-Mirei-*