BAW that made me cry. Best fanfic I've EVER read.

And also, the OC's name made me SQUE

Very well done. but ... Zenna Henderson??

Machine Guns > Ohio

I bow before your authorial greatness

I love this installment! I laughed so much... Kayla was just hilarious, unable to figure out that Tavington wasn't immediately drawn to her... Her exploits were so hilarious! I love the wagon driver; "If'n I war ten years younger..."

What I found most funny was the fact that Tavington actually dragged that whirligig with him, that he would actually have a need to bring such an item. Surely these items weren't hauled along the South Carolina countryside with great regularity!

Very well done!

too funny! do you think that you can add a second part to this one? I'm really curious as to what happens next!

Oh, dear Lord. I have not laughed that much in a long time! I'm still giggling! I love the fangirl reference ("Squee! Squee!" Do they not know how much they sound like pigs?) And the name of those songs were priceless! As my daughter says, "Fun-nee!"

Delightful! And good to see an older heroine, too!

A superb story! Apols for my absence! This is excellent - I love your portrayal of the older William!

This was great! I so enjoyed the contrast of cultures and times. We can certainly relate to Diana when she travelled back to the 18th century. Even with months of study and training, you would feel so lost and vulnerable without the modern conveniences. Then to have Tavington and some of the others travel forward was fantastic. The changes they saw would be overwhelming. They would feel a sense of loss and vulnerability in a completely different way. Tavington was very used to being in control of his world - then suddenly everything had changed. I like how he adapted. The story was entertaining all the way through. Thank you for all of the details about each period - it helped to bring the reader into the story.

Wah! Tell me it's not over! I hope you will write more in this universe later! Thank you for a great story!

I'm sorry it's over, but I hope you'll write more about them someday (please, pretty please?) It was a great story I liked the way the Romans started thinking about mythology. Will Tavington ever get to see Alexander the Great? That would be cool.

As the saying goes, "All good things must come to an end", alas. I'm really sorry that this story wasn't many chapters longer. But, I realize that writing and researching a story of this nature must be incredibly time-consuming, and am grateful that the fic lasted as long as it did.

I do hope, though, that you might consider writing a sequel or postscript someday: while you did an eminently satisfactory job of tying up all the threads of the complex plot, my curiosity about the New Atlanteans and their world remains unsatiated--for instance, what bee did Emily have in her bonnet after her conversation with the young Irishwoman, and will anything come of her flirtation with Publius Vibius? (it was very interesting to read about the Bordon/Clytie pairing--it doesn't look as if the poor girl will ever be able to completely overcome her cultural conditioning--and the dynamics of a relationship involving a female "21" and a freeborn male "oldtimer" would be equally fascinating) Also, how will the New Atlanteans cope with an influx of Irish immigrants who regard them as gods and their technology as magic? As well, the mention that the Romans are now able to distill strong liquor, and are distributing it to the barbarian tribes on the frontier (a la 19th-century whiskey trade with the Indians?), is cause for disquiet, seeming to bear out Diana's fears about the kind of exploitation that she and her colleagues wanted so desperately to avoid.

Even if you don't write about the further adventures of the Aurora Project, I would still welcome any additional installments to this anthology.

::sniffle::

This was absolutely lovely. I've really enjoyed your excursion into historical sci-fi. So...what's up next?

BTW, have you ever considered getting a livejournal? None of my business, of course, but it is a really awesome place for readers to keep up with the projects of their favorite authors; I'd very much like to keep up with *yours*.

Ah, how simply splendid this time-traveling adventure has been! How I wish you had more of this tale up your sleeve, greedy thing that I am.

As usual, I am quite struck by the seamless weaving of historical fact with your own innovation in this tale. Brilliant!