it's not bad! you should make more chappies... for me *puppyeyes*
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'Kaiba – the socially retarded genius'
I loved that line - sums him up perfectly when you think about it. I'd have liked more to happen, but it's fine the way it is, and amusing to read. I also liked this bit...

‘Hey! Gimme a hand with this Kaiba!’
‘No.’
‘Come on!’
‘No.’
‘Dammit! Were both doing this!’
‘No.’

Hehe, I love Kaiba sometimes. Well, good job!
ReaperRain

-snicker-

Sorry, but I'll put -you- in agony asking for more.

Definetly a good start.

-winks- looking 'round for more.

That was actually pretty good...for a starting chapter; at least they still seem in character. Not that I mind when they become OOC; sometimes making them so is necessary. I hope you continue this...I really do...I want to see more Seto/Joey-ness!

naa, i don't think that it's bad. i like it a lot, it' so joey-ish to think like that... hope you go on writing this somewhen?? and please excuse my english - not my mother tongue

There was no agony! It was good! I like that you went up to the point where Kaiba offers him the ride and stopped there. It ended nicely, is all I'm saying, cuz it leaves you with that whole "I know what's gonna happen from here!" feeling. So I liked that. And your grammar and spelling seemed fine to me; I didn't notice any glaring errors, so kudos to you for that one. Me like da fic. ^-^

bwahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *wipes tears of joy from eyes* ah...mwahahawhahahhahahahahaahahahahahahahhahhahahahhahhaahh
that's what I was doing while I read it and as I copied and pasted some lines from the story to show my cousin her expression was: XD

I'd say GOOD JOB Twas a good story but um I see not even a sliver of a trace of yaoi but okay. Add some more chapters, eh?

*cackles* I loved that last line, for being so unmistakably Joey-ish, and for placing Kaiba's 'generous' offer in perspective, rather than making it an obvious , slightly corny overture on Kaiba's part. I'm delighted to hear there'll be more to this fic! ^-^

Wow. That's a really good fic. I like it. I think its kinda original, which is good ^-^

Oh I like this! Really I do! Thank you for not turning the characters OOC. I hate it when writers do that! If you feel another surge of randomness hit you please write some more on this! It's excellent!
Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty

Oh, don't stop writing! LOL! That was great and refreshing actually so please, keep going if you can! I just love how you portrayed Joey and his pov, especially when he switched to 3th person (I do that also! ^^)

you better update this as fast as you can!
or else i will send my evil pug minions to get you and force you too do that!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

^^ Aw, Seto should turn out to be an utter sap waiing to spring his love on Jou! ^.^ That'd be so cute! Yay for cutness fics with a fun Jou, hee hee third-person, I like it. I do it too! ^^;

Update soon, onegai?

I liked it, And I don't think it was incredibly bad. I like the way you wrote Joey's POV too.

Well, it's quite cute really =) The plot may be unoriginal but you write clearly and humorously. I enjoyed reading it.