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Hell-of-Fire 10/24/05 . chapter 6
I think I like Alex *g* but what happened to McGee, where did he go?
the-Bookworm-Princess 3/8/05 . chapter 6
That was interesting. I liked Alex a lot, but where did McGee go?
CelticPuzzleStrangerRanger 3/8/05 . chapter 6
awesome possome! great story! will there be a sequal? hapy writing!

Sakura
CelticPuzzleStrangerRanger 2/23/05 . chapter 3
hehe, silly gibbs :)! ok, well, 2 criticize (not that i'm one to do it but i'm good at it...so there - and if u were my mom, i'd say grr, but ur not, so there - ) ok, now i'm done w/ getting side tracked...where was i? o yea, now 2 criticize: ur chaps r really short. thats pretty much it...i cant find anything else to advise u on, so...yea. good description, very cannon (thats a good thing), all in all its very good (other than the length of ur chaps). pleez update soon!

Sakura
Anonymous 327 2/21/05 . chapter 3
I have to say, go you! on the research for the restaurant and school! I'm from Maryland, near DC, it always makes the stories so much more real when real places are in it. ;)
Malaskor 2/21/05 . chapter 3
Nice chappie.

And just to add some additional speculation: besides a person in the medical field a good butcher or cook would be capable of cutting cleanly... which it was is hard to determine - that is unless some tell-tale tool mark was left behind by the blade used...

Oh and I just noticed: What is the connection to the Navy/Marines? I guess I missed it, cause there should be one for NCIS to become involved...

Keep it up and thanks for sharing.
HelenL 2/21/05 . chapter 3
::chuckles:: Abby is the only one who can leave Gibbs completely clueless. It's kind of ironic how the only person who really keeps Gibbs on his toes is the one person who doesn't even try to. Heh. Abby rocks! Keep up the good work, okay?
HelenL 2/21/05 . chapter 2
Heh... Poor Alex. Once again, she has no idea what she's getting herself into, does she?
BeckettFan 2/20/05 . chapter 3
Cool! this is really good! lol! i love this bit:

"My computer screen tells all," Abby retorted, giving an evil laugh. "I could see you in the screen oh genius one. Anyway, enough with the small talk. What can I do ya for?"

"Results. What did you discover about our necklace?"

"It belonged to a sixteen year old girl named Kayla Mason."

"Where did you get that information from?" Gibbs scratched his head. Abby always amazed him. Still sitting in her chair, Abby rolled over to another computer. This one listed a bunch of data.

"There was an inscription. It said, 'Sweet Sixteen. Kayla Mason.' I just took a wild guess and assumed it belonged to Kayla Mason," Abby said sarcastically.

lol! sumtimes Gibbs is an idiot! lol! and thanks for the reviews! and i understand about you not reviews the first chapters everyones entitled to have their opinion! and i personally like all pairings, except for McAbby! newayz plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!

Love Megan
Malaskor 2/20/05 . chapter 2
Heheh... nice chapter. Alex seems to fit right in with the lunatics (onle in the best sense of the word of course) of NCIS :)

I'm lookig forward to seeing more.

Thanks for sharing, keep it up.
shiri 2/20/05 . chapter 1
are we gonna get some fun or what?

please post soon!
HelenL 2/20/05 . chapter 1
::chuckles:: I love the way that you bring out the characters. LMAO! Poor Alex. She has no idea what she's getting into, does she? What with Kate and Tony's constant switching between flirting and arguing, Abby and Gibbs' constant flirting... Ducky's odd stories; Gibbs quirky habits; ABBY'S quirky habits... Yeah, poor Alex. Good job though!
Malaskor 2/20/05 . chapter 1
Interesting, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned. It would also be nice to read why McGee is gone (and where to)

Just to mention it: "Suma Kumlada" should be "summa cum laude"

Keep it up and thans for sharing.
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