what is your problem? I really don't get how someone with such wonderful works of literary could eve consider dumping on someone elses! You know what? you are doubely evil becasue you even got your friend to dump on it too Its disgusting. Life and Death are always paired up, BECASUE THEY GO TOGETHER. Just in case you don't know what together means
Together:in or into association or relationship

does that clear things up a bit?

I'm so glad, that was sarcasm by the way.

I must applaud you however, you see I have never seen another review compossed entirely of sarcastic remarks.

Do you know what they did to snotty people like you in the 70's? Well just in case you don't which I'm guessing is correct, they would shave off all their body hair and pour molasses on their feet, then send them out into public to show their shame before the world.

Now I know you are going to send me an equally, if not more so, flaming review telling me I am in turn an ignoramus, but I want you to know that I am deeply appaled at your lack of constraint.

I wouldn't have been nearly as bad if your freind hadn't joined in the cross-fire as well. I always say, "If you don't like the story, don't read it!"

There I'm done now, but be warnd, I was in a good mood!

That is an amazing piece of work when it comes to conveying the emotions, visible and underlying.
Wonderful use of formatting and phrasing as well.
enjoyed reading it, yes, very much so.

*claps her hands*

you better become a writer one day! I will seriosuly buy all your books. lol.

Once again another GREAT story! ^^

you know... the title does fit... and it fits well.

-goes to wash minds eye thouroughly-

Wow...that was cool...very angsty, very violent, much anger and hostility. Yet very nicely put together. I enjoyed it very much.
-N

Mon.
Dieu.

I think I love you. T_T; I mean. Well, this was just.. Captivating, in a weird, sort of way. I mean.. I couldn't stop reading. T_T I knew the bolded back stucktogetherwords were going to make me have nightmares, but I just had to keep reading and I did and when it ended I craved for more. T_T It's 0432AM and I'm sitting here, reading this and wanting more.

That just makes me wonder what the hell kind of person I am. *falls* BUT ANYWHO. :3 Yes.

Captivating.
The bolded part and how it's stucktogetherlikethislikewhenI'mspazzing is a nice effect. Kind of creepy how Saint Michael ties into this, but I like. And the fact that it's Duo.. I like even more. I mean, we all know he can't be ridiculously happyhighonsugar 24/7. Him being a creepy ** mafacka in a ficlet makes me smile like woah. :D

;3
*heart*