 Pobbin 2005-09-25 . chapter 5 I can see that you haven't updated this in a while, which is too bad, as I think it's really quite good. I like how you write Malfoy, flaws and everything. He's probably the closest to canon I've ever read (except the whole going to fall in love with Ginny thing...) What I mean is, he's arrogant, but you don't overdo it. He worries about his lady problems, but it's nothing unrealistic. I'm also liking the subtle hints of Ginny falling for him. Like when she wishes someone would go to such great lengths to woo her. It's a totally reasonable wish, that any girl would think of under the circumstances. But it's also starting to develop her feelings for Malfoy. This really is a wonderful fic, and I enjoyed these chapters immensely. You're style is brilliant, great work. |
 Delrious 2005-07-24 . chapter 5Great Fic! Write some more! |
 remembrances 2005-07-22 . chapter 5Update! Por favor! Despite my initial surprise at Ron and Pansy, I've enjoyed this fic, and would hate to see it end! |
 justahpfan 2005-07-11 . chapter 5OMG!You must write more! Why did he do that?!?!I'm going to die if you dont update soon!! |
 account. 2005-04-28 . chapter 5lol brilliant! please update soon! |
 lavender baby 2005-04-20 . chapter 5interesting... kissing... hm, is mr. malfoy trying the jealous technique? I really like this fic, please update soon! |
 sam 2005-04-19 . chapter 5 a cliffhanger how mean
i like this story a lot
update soon |
 mz.sammiz 2005-04-19 . chapter 5SORT OF A SLOW START, BUT IT'S REALLY GOOD! |
 jamc91 2005-04-19 . chapter 5I loved the 'Hurry up and tell me so I can tell you if it's s* or not' bit! That was so funny.
You said 'there's kissing in this chapter'. I beg to differ. It wasn't exactly much, is it?
Oh well. Maybe you'll elaborate more next chapter. -hint hint-
Okay. A question: Is this another plan of Draco's, or is it real?
...Well, it'll probably be answered next chapter anyway, so I suppose there's no point in me asking, is there?
Right. So...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 Isadora 2005-04-17 . chapter 5Oh. |
 Ehlonna 2005-04-17 . chapter 5OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG lol why?!?!?!? what's going on? lol not that I mind but wow...where'd that come from? lol update soon! |
 Pia O'Leary 2005-04-17 . chapter 2So far so good! ^_^ |
 purus.flere 2005-04-17 . chapter 5Ah he kissed her! But why? Oh he's playing with her isn't he? Anyways interesting story, I can't wait to find out what happens next, especially Ginny's reaction to the kiss. Update again soon and often! |
 BlueJeanJunkie 2005-04-16 . chapter 5WOAH! I wasn't expecting THAT at all! A little action between Draco and Ginny already, I mean. But I'm not complaining! Anyway, I love your writing. It's simple but so fitting. It doesn't need big words and wild twists to be interesting. The plot alone suffices for that. It's a really great idea. I love it. Please continue! :D |
 Pamie884 2005-04-16 . chapter 5Hmm it was a bit abrupt, I'm not quite sure what Draco's playing at, It is Malfoy smoochies none the less, so yay for that! lol. Draco is acting like such a moron over Pansy lol I love it. Nice work. |