Loved it! Great job.

This is just gorgeous. I can well believe the nightly touring ritual that you have described here. And I love where you've placed everyone in this 'missing scene'.

There's plenty more on the cutting room floor. Each of the movie books/documentaries gives us a taunting glimpse of something that didn't make it in the final edition. And - oh - for a 2-disc grown-up special edition dvd ...!

But I guess the deleted scenes will have to play out in our imagination alone. And if your muse finds another ... I'll be waiting eagerly!

I enjoyed this story. It's nice to see the world from Kyrano's point of view. This fic has has a wonderful feel.

I've never read a movie-verse fiction that I've liked, until now. This is very well done. I enjoy the economy of your style, and look forward to seeing more from you.

This is very well done. Not many versions of what Kyrano thinks of this whole mess, and the aftermath. More of a story here would be well received I think.

This is really good. Short but penetrating. Keep writing.

Doesn't look sloppy to me in format. Or in any other respect. This was a good, clean, atmospheric piece of writing. I had guessed who the wanderer was roughly a third of the way through the story, but seeing things through his unique point of view made the story even more powerful. No one else has really delved into the reaction of this character to this extent, and I applaud you for daring to do so. An excellent fiction and one worth recommending.